Originally posted by Dr. Cossack
Typo? What typo? I reviewed the text, but perhaps I forgot something...
Actually, You did...and you made a new one too...
1)The last sentence of the overall rating:
In fact, such an option is available from the Options screen once you got
through a CD.
*That's supposed to be get
. remember, in the rules of grammar, NEVER use any word in past tense when describing something indirectly.
2)Graphics rating sentence:
On the other side, the sprites used during battle, even if well representating
our enemies, are not very well animated.
uh, here's a suggested rewrite:
On the flip side,even if the enemy sprites are well rendered, their animation frames are too simple...
Oh, yeah, these too...
3)sentence near the third picture:
The device, coming from an ancient civilisation, creates microwave interference at a low degree.
*Civilization is spelt with a Z.
4)the music rating:
The music is very well fiting the current events in the game,
* You forgot a T in fitting...
That's all. I saved both the old and new versions of the SAR info page for comparisons. You were able to crack down on all the obvious typos, but you missed these. I'm not being impossible: I'm just-in my own little way- trying to help you in your site... I hope you understand...
[Edited on 12/6/2002 by Keiji]