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That was a sad episode, those poor navis.:cry: Although it was funny.:lol:


Yes, innocent girls are SO cruel. *stares around suspiciously*

Don\'t worry, they might, I repeat, MIGHT get a bigger role. Maybe, MAYBE only in Flashbacks, but still...

Oh, and that Sharpy...
Reminds me of Revolver Ocelot Cross Searchman... 0_o


Yeah I though some people would think of him as a Searchman knock off, ah well. But how did you like his back story, cause I wanta fix it if theres anything wrong.


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That was a sad episode, those poor navis.:cry: Although it was funny.:lol:


Yes, innocent girls are SO cruel. *stares around suspiciously*

Don\'t worry, they might, I repeat, MIGHT get a bigger role. Maybe, MAYBE only in Flashbacks, but still...

Oh, and that Sharpy...
Reminds me of Revolver Ocelot Cross Searchman... 0_o


Yeah I though some people would think of him as a Searchman knock off, ah well. But how did you like his back story, cause I wanta fix it if theres anything wrong.


Hmmm... will do. Leon will be old in the end though... :eek:


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Very well, I just provide ideas and you make them into art.


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This just in! New episode! :D

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Their data swirled all around him. Dozens more fell at a swing of his sword. The Mettaurs were no match for him. Even the Omega’s were nothing but annoying flies to him. It was a giant horde, but after a few minutes, all of them were deleted.

“Well done, Chip. Log out.” A voice said.

“Yes, sir!”

He plugged the PET out of the computer. “I have a few more minutes before I have to go to school again.” The boy said.

“Why do you ever go?” His Navi asked. “You get yourself kicked off every time, so why bother?”

“Because, Chip, I have to go. And it is sort of fun torturing younger kids. Especially after you make them think first you are a really nice guy.”

“Agreed, my lord.”


--- --- --- --- ---


Sakana-hakase! Doctor!” One of the employees yelled. “Doctor, come over here, quickly!”

Sakana-hakase walked over to the terminal were the employee was working. “What is it?” He asked.

“Doctor, look!” The man pointed at the screen. “An assault has been launched on Project M! It has been destroyed!”

“What?” Sakana Sebastian pulled the man out of the chair. “That’s impossible! It was guarded by the best defence programs! There doesn’t simply exist a Navi of that strength!”

The other man kept his mouth shut. He knew they both knew better. Sebastian looked at him.

“What are you standing there?! Send a team in to investigate!”

“Yes, sir!” The man walked off.

“Impossible… Project M…” Sebastian muttered.


??? ??? ??? ??? ???


He swung his right hand around. It felt good to have a sword instead of an underarm, somehow. He pulled his clear green visoir into his helmet and looked around. Data of deleted Heal Navis swirled into nothingness around him.

“You won!”

He turned around, just in time. A girl jumped at him, hugging him to death.

“Woah, take it easy!” He said to the blonde girl.

“I can’t believe it! You won!”

“Well…” He said grinning.

“There’s no way he could’ve done it without me.” A familiar voice said.

He looked up. “DEMI?”

It was clearly Demi. Who else he knew had such bright green eyes and looked like he was always smiling?

“Well done, my friend!” Demi said. “Metto.EXE, log out.”

Then, his vision blurred, and all became black…



“FOR THE LAST TIME, RYUUDO METTO, WAKE UP!!!” A voice bellowed through his room.

“GAH!” Metto shot up. “What’s wrong?”

“What’s wrong? What’s wrong?” His mother shouted. “It’s MONDAY! SCHOOL! Now get the hell out of that bed, so I can clean up!”

Metto got out of bed, and took his clothes which were hanging over his chair. He looked at his mom. “Shoo shoo.” He said, waving his hand at her.

She sighed and went out of the room. Metto put on his clothes. He wasn’t bothered at all. He took the PET out of the charger and went downstairs.

He ate breakfast quickly, omelettes with bacon on a piece of bread with extra ketchup, then he took his obentou bade his mom goodbye - “Bye, Metto,” she replied - and he went to school.


… … … … …


“Okay class,” Mary-sensei said. “We will get somebody new in this class today!”

“I hate it when she does that voice.” Metto whispered behind his hand to Sara. “It’s like we’re 3rd graders or something!”

“Okay, Wemtoo-san, you may come in!” Their teacher said cheerfully.

The door opened slowly, creaking as loud as it had ever done. A sudden chill spread through the classroom, the open windows creaked in their hinges, the wind blew the autumn leaves through them, the lamp went off and on and off and on…

A figure stepped through the doorway. A tall boy. Raven-black hair with dyed white stripes and with hair gel through it. Cold, marine blue eyes with a slightly visible bloody red shimmer, colored contacts. He wore black pants with red stripes on it, looking suspiciously much like blood, a black shirt with a close-up picture of the sun on it and black and red sneakers. He held a bag over his right shoulder, and he seemed relaxed, though the look in his eyes made you think like Death had come to claim you.

Mary-sensei closed the door behind the boy.

“Everybody, this is Wemtoo Ivan. He’s a new student in your class.”

“It’s Wemtoo-Miraji Ivan.” He said calmly. But Mary-sensei had heard a sense of anger in it, according to the slightly scared look on her face.

“Well, er… yes, what he said,” She said. “Well Ivan, find yourself a place to sit!”

Ivan looked around the classroom. He looked at Metto intensely for a short while, and gave Sara a short look of interest too. There were three empty seats.

“Hmpf…” He walked towards one of the empty seats halfway in the back, in the left middle row and sat down. He put his bag onto the floor, pulled out a PET the color of dried-up blood, and plugged it into the computer which was built into the desk.

“Okay then class,” Their teacher said. “Let’s continue the lesson.”


… … … … …


Metto sighed. “I was almost asleep back there! Man, that woman talks!”

“Metto, you were asleep back there.” Demi replied.

“Yeah, whatever,” Metto said. “But now is virus busting class! Woohoo!”

And I’ve heard we’re going to do something special this year…” Demi said.

“Something special?”

“Something special.”

“Something special!”

“Something speeeeeeeeeciaaalll…”

“Shut up Demi.”

“Meh…”

They entered the classroom. It was large, and there were computers all over the place. There were seats along the sides, and Metto knew that behind the mirror in one of the walls, was actually a window if you looked from the other side. On that other side were people to control the school’s network and to keep track of everything that happened and the student’s results.

The students sat down on the seats and plugged their PET’s into the computers. A few dozen voices could be heard through the entire school. “Plug-in! Demi.EXE! Transmission!” Metto yelled.

The Navis appeared inside the cyberworld. In front of them stood their teacher’s Navi, Sensei.EXE. They knew what they would be going to do. One Navi after the other would battle three viruses of their choice. This was their first lesson of the year. But, as Demi had said, this year, they had something special for them.

“Seeing as how many students will be participating in this year’s World N-1 Grand Prix,” Sensei said, “Your netbattling classes have adapted to that. That means that this year, you will also actually netbattle against each other. This has been done so that the N-1 Committee won’t have to include you in the preliminaries, since these lessons are actually your preliminaries. So in these lessons, you may battle eachother or viruses, which can be found beyond that door overthere, for practise. We hope you’ll have fun.”

Sensei disappeared, and the students and their Navis started talking loudly to eachother.
“Silence!” Their teacher yelled, “Start the Netbattling already!”

The students shut up immediately. They knew what temper this teacher had. Within a few moments, half of the class was busy Netbattling.

“Well,” Demi said, “Who shall we challenge Metto-kun?”

“Why not the new guy?” Metto said. “I wonder what kind of Navi he has and what their skills and techniques are. Plus, it’s a big challenge.”

“Then New Guy it is.” Demi looked around to the Navis who weren’t Netbattling yet. “Any idea who it is?”

“Just look for one who you’ve never seen before, probably male, and who looks tough.”

“Got him.” Demi walked up to a Navi who was standing a little away from the others, observing the battles. “Hey, you! You the new guy, right? Why don’t we battle?”

Metto sighed. For God’s sake Demi, use tact for once!

“Whatever…” The Navi said. He wore a spiky green helmet, his left underarm was a giant green fist covered with twisted spikes. On his right shoulder was a spiky shoulderplate for protection and on his back, was, like with all other Navis, his power pack, which was green and, obviously, also spiked. His boots looked just the same as Demi’s, except that they were green, and that the tips of his boots’ spikes were glowing. The icon on the middle of his chest was a light blue star. Also, have I already mentioned he was green?

He just stood relaxed in front of Demi, who didn’t know what to do, so he just did the same.

Just a moment later, the Navi had disappeared from his spot. He appeared behind Demi, smashing his fist to his back. “Gotcha, rookie.”

Demi stood up, cracked his back and wiped the blood from his mouth. Now he was ready to fight.




You really gotta hate that Navi. >.<
I’m calling the World Netlife Fund! They should arrest him for killing all those innocent Metts!
Mettlife is Netlife! *waves WNF Anti-Metthunting flag* “KEEP DA METTS ALIVE!!!”

Anyone who can figure out what Sakane-hakase means get 10 points and a cookie! ^_^
Project M will be of great importance later on, but if you guys are smart, you would’ve figured this out already for yourself, seeing what a short part it was.

Well, after the scene in the lab, there weren’t ‘--- --- --- --- ---’ nor ‘… … … … …’, since a dream isn’t actually in the real world, nor in the cyberworld. Now, about Metto’s dream, ‘cause that’s what it was if you haven’t figured it out already, I think many people and Navis alike would like to trade places for a day or so. The blonde girl is obviously… erm… 10 points for you if you figure out! ^_^

I based Wemtoo’s name off a semi-evilish character from an anime. NOT NTW. And it wasn’t even human, but a lot of people loved him/her/it! If you guess correctly… Correct! 10 points you get! ^_^
Anyone here who already hates this New Guy? You’re probably not the only one!
I figured out that I should make him quite full of himself, and proud of the fact that he’s ‘more’ than other people, considering he emphasized his twofold family name. So… if you guess what I mean with Miraji…
You know what I would be going to say, dontcha? :P

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sweet! I cant wait for the next epesode! great job!


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sweet! I cant wait for the next epesode! great job!


I try to post every Mon-and-Friday. So... just two more days! ;)


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sweet! I cant wait for the next epesode! great job!


I try to post every Mon-and-Friday. So... just two more days! ;)
YAY!!!! I hope you put Gate in one of them


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O, he just asks for it to get his ass kicked.

i bet some people think that Mr Spikey is the thief of the M project. but knowing of all the plot-twists in the world, he probably isn\'t :D

although it would be different if he would be the criminal.

well i know when you\'ll see me again here ;)


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i bet some people think that Mr Spikey is the thief of the M project. but knowing of all the plot-twists in the world, he probably isn\'t :D



All I can say is: ;)


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What?! No Tacoman?! :eek:

First look on bro Morph\'s ficcy and whaddoisee? Nuthing diff\'r\'nt frum ze uther ficcis. Blech.


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Whatever...


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SHOOT! SLASH! PUNCH! SLASH! KICK! PUNCH! KICK! SHOOT! SLASH! PUNCH! KICK! SHOOT!

All other Navis had stopped their fighting. They were all watching the battle between Demi and the new spiky Navi.

“60 zennies on the new guy!” a Navi named Surfman yelled.

“Just 60? 1500 on Demi!” another Navi, Scorchman, said.

“3000 for a tie!” Agil.

“800 on Demi!” Wireman.

“5000 on Spiky!” Riddleman.

“80,000 on Demi!”

All Navis turned towards the owner of the voice, their Operators towards her Operator.

80,000?” Vincent, Agil’s Op. asked.

“Well… I’m quite sure Demi’ll win…” Sara said.

The battle was still not finished. Both were doing remarkably well.

“Spike Fist!” The spikes on Spiky’s fist extended to twice their length and he thrust the fist forward at Demi. “Barrier!” Demi blocked the attack with a barrier.

“Flame Punch!” The fist’s colour turned to a fiery red as it lit up in flames. Spiky thrust his arm forward again and the fist de-connected it from his arm. It flew at Demi at high speed.

“Bubbler, Battlechip, Slot-In!” Demi’s arm morphed into a water buster and he fired the Bubbler at fist, extinguishing it’s fire. As it had flew back towards Spiky and reconnected itself with his arm, Demi decided to go offensive.

“Shockwave!” He yelled, as Metto inserted the Battlechip into the PET. The attack scurried towards Spiky, but he was prepared.

“PanelCrack, Battlechip, Slot-In!” Ivan said. The panel in front of Spiky was destroyed, and the shockwave stopped there as it couldn’t go through the air.

Then Metto suddenly remembered something. Something that could easily make them win this battle.

“Okay Demi, do you remember our accidentally achieved secret weapon from Battle #9?” Metto asked his Navi.

“How can I forget?” Demi replied “It made us win that one and I used it during the Great Virus Spread from last year!”

“Then lets do it.” Metto said. “Sword, Battle Chip, Slot-In!” Demi’s right underarm turned into a sword.
“Wide Sword, Battle Chip, Slot-In!” Demi’s left underarm turned into a different sword.
“Long Sword, Battle Chip, Slot-In!” Demi held both his arm in the air, both swords fused with eachother, glowing with a bright light blue light.

“Aha, the Program Advance…” Ivan muttered. “We can do that too! Fighter Sword, Knight Sword, Hero Sword, Battle Chips, Triple Slot-In!” Spiky’s hands morphed, his fist became a normal glove, and a sword appeared in his hands. “Program Advance: Legendary Sword!” The Navi and Operator yelled simultaneously.

Demi put his hands forward. “I’m not done yet!” Metto pulled out a few more chips.

“Fire Sword, Aqua Sword, Elec Sword!” He yelled, putting the chips into the PET. “Fire Blade, Aqua Blade, Elec Blade, Battle Chips, Slot-In!” The light in Demi’s hands shone intensely, a large sword appeared in his hands. “Dream Sword Zero!” They yelled.

The students and their Navis gazed at what had happened in awe.

“What?” Ivan hissed. That’s impossible! He has fused THREE Program Advances into one?! How can he do that?

Spiky stood still. He had been wondering how that little weak Navi boy could’ve possibly matched him, but now, he was truly amazed at what his opponent had accomplished. No time for being amazed now. He thought. He disappeared from the spot and reappeared right next to Demi, his sword raised. Demi blocked the slash with a look on his face like he did it with ease. Now they duelled on with their swords. Sword versus sword. Program Advance versus Program Advance. But which would hold it longer? The one based off three Program Advances itself? Or the one made with three Mega Class Battle Chips?

Demi and Spiky were face-to-face by now. Their swords were being pushed against eachother by the both of them.

“You… shall not… win this battle…” Spiky said. “I… shall not… lose… the Legendary Sword… is the strongest sword PA in existence…”

“Wrong… the Dream Sword Zero is…” Demi replied, pushing his blade with some more strength. “You… WILL… lose this…”

“Oh no I won’t…” Spiky now put all his strength into pushing his blade, forcing Demi more and more to the ground.

A storm of strategies raced through Metto’s brain. Then, suddenly, like a sudden lightningbolt had struck him, Metto remembered something.
Netbattle #11… Our last one in a long time… He thought.

Heh. A special feature of this Program Advance. I can use it right now to end this battle in a cinch, but… I could also save it for the N-1… *sigh* Decisions, decisions…

Spiky was winning the pushing with the swords. “Metto… help me…” Demi said.

“Step Sword, Battle Chip, Slot-In!” Demi disappeared from sight, making Spiky fall onto his face.

“What the… ?” Spiky said as he got up.

“Gotcha.” A voice said behind him. Demi had reappeared there and he swung his sword at his opponent, stopping it just an inch from his face. “Game over.”

“That was great! An awesome battle! Better than any N-1 final I’ve ever seen!” Their teacher said. He shook Metto’s and Ivan’s hands. “Well done boys, well done!”

The class cheered. The ones who had put their money on Metto, that is.

“Here Luna.” The Navi turned around. In front of her stood a Navi who looked like he was made out of books. “I’m Bookman, and you’ve just won 560,000 zennies, thanks to your Operator’s bet on Demi.”

“Thank you,” Luna said, taking the money from the other Navi.

“Just doing my job.” The other said right before he logged out.

“Wow, Metto,” Vincent said. “That was some amazing technique you showed. How did you do it?”

“Sheer luck.” Metto replied with a smile.

Ivan walked up to Metto. Metto looked at the other boy. “Hmpf… Well done.” Ivan said.

Metto smiled. “Thanks.” He held out his hand. “You did great, too.”

Ivan stared at Metto’s hand for a short while. Then a slight smile came to his lips and his hand grasped Metto’s. “Yeah, good battle.”

“They put up a good show, didn’t they Yuri?” Sensei.EXE asked his Operator.

“Yes,” the man replied. “Maybe they can show us more…” He held his hand against his pocket.

As Metto and Ivan received compliments from their classmates, they noticed their teacher coming towards them.

“You know,” Yuri-sensei said. “I was thinking… can’t you two show us some more of your great netbattling skills? I’ve got a pretty strong virus here.” He held up a disk.

“Another Netbattle?”

“Yes. You two against the virus.”

Metto looked at Demi. The Navi nodded. “Whenever you are.”

Metto and Ivan looked at eachother. Ivan grinned. “Let’s fight the damn thing!”

“Well, okay then lads! Let’s do…” The bell rang. “Owww…” The class sighed. They wanted to see Demi and Spiky in battle again. “Well class, seems that’s about it for today! Be sure to make your homework!” Yuri-sensei said as they left.




Okay, I thought I put some betting here, which would make the chapter more interesting and longer.
I have thought of the Dream Sword Zero Program Advance a while ago. I thought: “Wouldn’t it be cool if you could put PA’s together?” I first thought of GigaCannon1-3, but then I remembered the three Dream/Life Swords from BN2. “Perfect.” That’s the word, yeah.
Then I just had to come up with a PA that could easily oppose the Life Sword Zero. Then I remembered the three mentioned swords from BN1 (Hero Sword coming from all others, too). So, then I put the three Mega Class chips together to get another awesome PA. PA vs. PA.
Then I just gave the Life Sword Zero a special feature: you can put in another sword chip to give the DSZ it’s power.
I decided not to let Demi and Spiky fight Yuri’s virus, since that’d make the chapter too long, and it makes you want to know what the virus is and how strong it is and such…


[Edited on 24-10-2005 by Morphman]


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Another nicely done chapter my friend.


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another great episode, but a Program Advance out of three Program Advances is a little off, an Advanced Program Advance. :rolleyes:


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another great episode, but a Program Advance out of three Program Advances is a little off, an Advanced Program Advance. :rolleyes:


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another great episode, but a Program Advance out of three Program Advances is a little off, an Advanced Program Advance. :rolleyes:


Live with it! :P
I did not think it was off it was AWSOME!!!!!!


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Thank you all. I started on the first episode with some special characters. It\'ll take a while before it hits the board, so be patient.
Also, I have adapted my \'Welcome\' PM, which most of you have probably recieved when you first came here (I don\'t think Blazen did), so that it includes a link to this thread. I\'ll get more readers! :D


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you really want a lot of readers on this one don\'t ya.

well i can\'t say you\'re wrong:D

if i wrote a fanfic i would love to have a lot of readers too


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you really want a lot of readers on this one don\'t ya.

well i can\'t say you\'re wrong:D

if i wrote a fanfic i would love to have a lot of readers too


You know, you could start one. And that it will join up with this one at some point. :D


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could be an idea.

i create a character and sometimes he appears in yours and in reverse.

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Well, I just came up with something good.
I\'m gonna make a Halloween Episode, and you guys may tell who should wear what!
For instance, picture Metto... in a Cloud costume! And Ivan... in Darth Vader one! And what about Sara? Dressed up as a Rohirrim Rider!

And what about the Navis? Demi as Harry Potter! Spiky as Neo! Luna as Yuna!

And don\'t forget... the original BN characters might show up as well... include those as well here... plus your fan-made ones.


NOTE: What?! 1501st post?! Where\'s da cake?!


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Well, I just came up with something good.
I\'m gonna make a Halloween Episode, and you guys may tell who should wear what!
For instance, picture Metto... in a Cloud costume! And Ivan... in Darth Vader one! And what about Sara? Dressed up as a Rohirrim Rider!

And what about the Navis? Demi as Harry Potter! Spiky as Neo! Luna as Yuna!

And don\'t forget... the original BN characters might show up as well... include those as well here... plus your fan-made ones.


NOTE: What?! 1501st post?! Where\'s da cake?!


*comes marching in with an oversized cake in twelve flavours and an extra large pile of tacos*

\"Oh when the Taco, comes marching in,
when the Taco comes marching in,
with an oversized birthday cake,
Oh, I want to be in the number,
of when the Taco comes marching in...


Gutsman as Frankenstein! Megaman as Dracula! Roll as Morticia! Protoman as a musketeer! Magicman as Gandalf! Thunderman with a big \'fro! Searchman as a G.I. Joe! Tacoman as a Mexican!


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Yeah, yeah, Taco... *sigh*
Now the others...


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“Owaaah!” Metto yawned as they went through the school’s doors. “I thought the day would never end.”

“Well, school’s over now, what shall we do?” Sara asked.

“I dunno. We could go by the chip shop, see if they have anything new. Hey, wanna come as well, Ivan?”

“Hmm… I don’t have anything better to do.”

“Alright! Chip shop it is!”


… … … … …


When they came to the chip shop, the saw it was… ‘Closed: go to our Chip Shop in Den City.’

“Well,” Metto said, “We still got plenty of time, shall we drop by there?”

“I’ll pass, my mom’s gonna be worried as hell if I stay away for too long.” Sara replied.

“Aw, c’mon!” Ivan said. “I’ll come, so you just might come along as well! Your mom’s not gonna call the police if you stay away an hour or so more.”

“Well…” Sara hesitated.

“Y’know,” Metto said, “If you wanna stay home and play with dolls instead of Battlechips, that’s fine with me, I’m going.”


… … … … …


Ten minutes later…

“I can’t believe I let myself be persuaded by you guys.” Sara said as they exited the underground station.

“Whatever.” Metto said.

“The chip shop’s supposed to be somewhere in District #6.”

“District 6?” Ivan asked. “I thought there were only five of them here?”

“There were. Until some years ago.”

“Ahhh…”

After a two-mile-long walk they entered the chip shop.

“WOW!” Ivan exclaimed in surprise. “They really have ALL kinds of chips here!” He took a look at the cases. “Here are all the Anti-chips! And up there, Navi chips! And…” He looked like a little kid that got excited over a new toy. A hand grabbed Ivan from behind. He turned around to see a man in uniform, a guard.

“Will you please calm down a bit?” He asked.

“Ow, yes sir, sorry.” Ivan muttered a little embarrassed.

“Excuse me,” Sara asked the woman behind the counter. “Where do you keep your Giga Class chips? I’d like to purchase some.”

“You’re going to buy Giga chips?” Metto and Ivan asked in unison.

“Yes, with the money I got with betting over your netbattle, I should be able to buy a maximum of three, I think.”

“Three Giga chips?!” The boys’ eyes went wide.

“Should we let her do it?” Metto asked Ivan behind his hand.

“No friggin’ way! How will we ever be able to defeat her in a netbattle if she has three Giga chips?!”

“Uhm… you may only have one Giga chip in your folder.”

“Really? Gee, that sucks.” Metto sighed, then looked at him, frowning.

“You really didn’t know?”

“No! My neighbour once bested me in battle with six of those things!”

“Then he was a cheater.”

“That sucks.”

“No shit.” They stopped talking behind their hands, as Sara came walking towards them, holding three chips.

“Look at these sweet things!\"

She said, beaming. She held out the chips: a Folder Back, a Blue Moon and a Drain chip. Metto’s and Ivan’s eyes almost popped out of their skulls.

“You were able to buy THOSE?!?!” They exclaimed after they left the shop.

“Hey! I had over half a million zenny with me! Plus they were having a sale today.”

“Just today?” Metto asked. “Aw, crap, I should’ve brought all my money. I had almost 300,000 zenny…” He leaned against the wall and growled out of disappointment.

“Aw, c’mon Metto! There will be more sales in the nea—”

Demi was cut off as the shop’s alarm went off. A person ran out of the store, clutching a case of Battlechips in his hands.

“CHIP THEFT!” The store’s guard ran after the thief, but landed on his face when he tripped over a wire that the thief had probably set up there before.

“Let’s go after that sunuvabitch!” Ivan yelled as he ran after the person. Metto and Sara soon followed.


… … … … …


“Score.” He thought aloud. He held up the chips against the light of the sun, one by one. Delta Ray Edge, Red Sun, Black Barrier… “One of their Giga chip cases! And it looks like none of the chips are missing! This must be my lucky day!”

Our lucky day, Rui-sama.” A voice said.

“Of course, but you have done nothing.” He said to the Navi.

“Hey! Who turned of the alarm!” The Navi replied.

“And failed miserably?” The boy added.

“Not funny!” The boy laughed.

“Is too!”

“Is not!”

“Is too!”

“Is not!”

“Is too!”

The door to the garage burst open. Through it came three teenagers.

“Hold it right there!” One of them yelled at him. He was standing on a plateau, a few yards above them.

He grinned. “Or else? You can’t come up here!”

“Or can we?” One of the teenagers, a boy wearing black jeans, red-and-white sneakers and a navy blue shirt, plugged in his PET into a control panel. The plateau were he was standing on started moving downwards.

“No way!” He exclaimed. “Jack in!” He jumped up (A/N: like those kids in Battle Network series do) and smashed his head against a steel pipe. “F***!” He exclaimed. “Transmission!”

With a burst of lightning the Navi was dropped into the control panel’s cyberworld. He wore a navy blue bodysuit, underneath black and dark green armor and he had black and dark green gloves, boots and helmet to match. He had his mouthguard donned over the lower half of his face, and a scarf was wrapped around his neck.
He looked at the Navi on the opposite side of the control panels cyber-plateau.

“If you don’t want to be deleted right now, I’d suggest you’d leave whilst you still can.”

“Try me.” The other replied. “A Navi with your name can’t be that good, can it?”

“What do you mean?” The dark coloured Navi asked.

“Well, since your Netop. called you, erm… F***… whilst jacking you in, I suggest you are.. uhm… the owner of that extraordinary name?”

“F***ING NO!” The first replied.



WHAT?! Sara was able to buy THOSE?!! :eek: Heheh. Well, they’ll be useful to her later on. And WTF?! I’d be very, VERY ashamed of myself if I were or had a Navi named… well, you know what I mean…

[Edited on 21-10-2005 by Morphman]


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nice, a chip thief

reminds me of Higsby but he takes them in a more legal way

Higsby challenges them and takes their chip but this guy takes them from shops

can\'t wait to see the fight between F*** and the other

[Edited on 21-10-2005 by Ray]


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make a fic about zero taking alia away from x :rofl:

[Edited on 21-10-2005 by zero777]


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Rioni... thanks for the Final-Zero music..

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Nicly done.


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Story lacks any depth at all, no character development, no area descriptions, and the whole \"san, kun, wing wang\" crap is way overdone, both in your story AND in general. People need to stop pretending they\'re from Japan.

~In a pissy but brutally honest mood.~

Don\'t quit your day job, dude.


1. I\'m not from Japan, but I like the style, sorta. And I don\'t feel like swinging of into an entirly different style just in the middle of the story.

2. Yes, it lacks depth. But then again, I\'m kinda new to this. I don\'t think the concept of Mega Man is good enough to give a story about it real depth. Plus, this was just the beginning. I\'m not really the kind of writer who let\'s his story get into the real depth of all of it in the first chapter.

3. As long as some people like it, I\'ll try to write on it a bit every time I can.

4. Not everybody can like it. That\'s with all stories! With all things! I mean, not everybody can like Megaman!

5. Descriptions of the area? Yes, you\'re right there, I should do that. From now on, I\'ll do that. I can\'t promise it\'ll be as J.K. Rowling\'s area descriptions (she\'s really good and detailed with it), but I\'ll try my best.

6. Job? >.>;; Two words: Too Young.


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Story lacks any depth at all, no character development, no area descriptions, and the whole \"san, kun, wing wang\" crap is way overdone, both in your story AND in general. People need to stop pretending they\'re from Japan.

~In a pissy but brutally honest mood.~

Don\'t quit your day job, dude.


1. I\'m not from Japan, but I like the style, sorta. And I don\'t feel like swinging of into an entirly different style just in the middle of the story.

2. Yes, it lacks depth. But then again, I\'m kinda new to this. I don\'t think the concept of Mega Man is good enough to give a story about it real depth. Plus, this was just the beginning. I\'m not really the kind of writer who let\'s his story get into the real depth of all of it in the first chapter.

3. As long as some people like it, I\'ll try to write on it a bit every time I can.

4. Not everybody can like it. That\'s with all stories! With all things! I mean, not everybody can like Megaman!

5. Descriptions of the area? Yes, you\'re right there, I should do that. From now on, I\'ll do that. I can\'t promise it\'ll be as J.K. Rowling\'s area descriptions (she\'s really good and detailed with it), but I\'ll try my best.

6. Job? >.>;; Two words: Too Young.
dont worry Morph. If only one person likes your fic then thats enough motivation for you to keep writing.I cant wait for the next episode! I hope you put in Gate soon.:D


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Well, ONE person? I think more of at least 3-4, which is the case.

But now I\'ve thought about it, that Japanesy style aint my style. I\'ll have to use feet and miles and such, but I\'m getting used to that, and... it\'s just that I\'m used to the English names. Forte does sound better than Bass, though, and Rockman seems just that slight bit better than Megaman. I guess I\'ll have you guys decide, I\'m confused. Damn wind...


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don\'t worry, i\'ll support you through and through and forever.

and don\'t forget your new episode today


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