whew, just a couple of weeks ausent and you burry my topic...,I finally bringed the prologue of the book I mentioned,here it is...
The Legacy of Darmarghat
In the very beggining of all ages, when the world was a sphere without form nor life, without air that to breathe, without sky to contemplate, when the Earth and the oceans were nothing but that distant shades of the future, and the reign of the nothingness guarded the world, Azthoz, the great God of the beggining and the end gave form to the sacred world that today we know as Darmargath, that in the language of the Gods it means: \"Place where the light is born\". Having already finished the last details of the world, it decided to create a being who would dominate those earths, and so, with the pen of phoenix it began to create the heart of the elves, beautiful beings with eyes of the color of the sky, gilded hair like rays of the great Xiohaz (the sun), with a kind and a soul full of good desires, a great determination, and mainly a heart with the sacred capacity of the power to love its resemblances, but that heart was not perfect since it could easily fall in an abyss of pain and sadness. Once finished elves, Azthoz the wise, left a single task, a mission by which they could live pacifically, the designated task was the one to take care of that beautiful world and to protect it of all evil being, of all those that wished the total dominion of that paradise and to proclaim the power for itselves, although this meant the loss of the life, the death of a loved being, the sentence of a whole nation, or, to lose forever the essence of life, this mission was accepted and carried out during millenia and the elves had a calm life, life that would be eternal in time but could not survive if it lost his same essence, since without it, the soul would be dried, it would be poisoned and all the elvish virtues would be sent to the forgetfulness, it would have the bitterness and the weight of the sentence to a full eternal life of bitterness and eternal pain and the dark. When the elves by any reason would dye(they can only die if a fatal blow in the battle is aimed to them), their souls would be taken to the celestial Court and they would be judged to them to go or not to the paradise or the underworld. In the first of these places its souls they would be in eternal rest, in the legitimate peace of which it is and what it could be, being compensated eternally of its short or long instance in Earth , and would live by the rest of the eternity in the incomparable happiness and the peace that the paradise offers. In the frightful underworld their souls would suffer eternally, even more than when they lose the vital essence, since their bodies would undergo the eternal and terrible torture.
When passing the eras, the elves prospered and had to take good care of that world and protect it from those who wanted to take the control on it. But as in all earth and soul on the world evil began to spread and the peace would not last too much, since Dherengthoz, king of the elves of the northeast had the seed of dischordy growing slowly in its heart, and, with the pass of the ages it wished to take the absolute superiority from the life to himself . It reunited a group of faithfuls followers and in order to create an army, it tortured and it deceived million elves, killing all that whot put in its way, trying not to be discovered by Thentherion, one of the eight guardians of the doors of the sky and heir of the legendary sword...
as the time happened , the army of Dherengthoz became more and more numerous, the world was plunging in an immense sea of darkness and fire, until the day of the ninth eclipse, when the sacred and celestial battle took its first step towards the destruction of the world, Dherengthoz defied the Gods and the eight guardians and so then the war began.
After thousand of years of conflicts and battles, Dherengthoz accomplished its purpose, now the world was under its complete dominion, but when the hour of the sentence it seemed near more and more, a hope ray was pronounced, it was then when Gil-Alendrox demonstrated its courage and, grasping the sword of Thentherion it attacked ferociously to Dherengthoz, finally destroying the dark kingdom that governed in those dark days and brought of return the freedom.
The Gods damned the dark elves to lose their soul forever and to not being able to rest until somehow they pay for its treason.
After numerous decades the Heroic Gil-Alendrox fell in love with a woman and procreated two children. It lived happily until from the supporters of the dark lord wanted to take the control from the world again, the war did not last too much, but Alendrox was assassinated by the greater and more faithful servant of the dark lord. His son Silkhald at behold the glorious death of his father ,he swore to revenge someday and, leaving the kingdom of its father in the distance, it began to learn to handle the dark arts, ignoring tan that would dominate their destiny for always during the rest of the ages and time..
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