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eternal dragon
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hi guys,(yeah I know I have been ausent for long,but true is than I hadnt time to check the topics,and I think topic have decayed seriously,the sence of this topic is to promote a book than me and a friend of mine are writting,called \"Legacy of Darmargarth\"its very interesting and I need your opinion
...ill post it later,times getting over


Sorry for been ausent all this time,but,dude darkeness its some serius bussiness....
just kidding just a long vacation and a really long
'duh.....I must do something but I can tell what it is'

eternal dragon
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no opinion?that might be,cuase I avent post whats this all about,well,youllsee,its a tale of a planet,two timws bigger than jupiter called \"darmargath\",this planet its mainly habited by elfs,white elfs,black elfs,Etc,
this planet is ruled also by its own gods wich are asthoz,siohaz,minohaz, and some other of \'em.
this is mainly at mayor plane
waht do you think of it?give your opinion when you can


Sorry for been ausent all this time,but,dude darkeness its some serius bussiness....
just kidding just a long vacation and a really long
'duh.....I must do something but I can tell what it is'

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My opinion is, don\'t double post. The story sounds great, but I know just about nothing.


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My opinion is, don\'t double post. The story sounds great, but I know just about nothing.


I second that opinion (i regret my doble-posting days)


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My opinion is, don\'t double post. The story sounds great, but I know just about nothing.


I second that opinion (i regret my doble-posting days)

You still do some times \'kay. And I will third that opinion and side with the respectable poster and the newbie.


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eternal dragon
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its all right than you post your opinion,but that was the base of the whole history,there are of course more and more things of this history
well,story beggins in the beauty city of elixitia,were emperor zidane watchs peacely its beautifull city,sudenly,he is attacked by a the sad remind of his father\'s perish,his father gil-alenfrox fell to the hands of the mighty aelederion,wich also resulted death on battle,her mother,may\'a,took both zidane and its brother silkhald,away from the battle sight
thats a little proof of the first book
how about?do you think it needs something else?make me now


Sorry for been ausent all this time,but,dude darkeness its some serius bussiness....
just kidding just a long vacation and a really long
'duh.....I must do something but I can tell what it is'

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...
its so good tahn youre chilled out,or its so bad than you are all death?
make me know,please


Sorry for been ausent all this time,but,dude darkeness its some serius bussiness....
just kidding just a long vacation and a really long
'duh.....I must do something but I can tell what it is'

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well,are you waiting me to post more or what,post anytyhing....
suddenly,zidane\'s empire becomes atacked by some kind of extrange especters riding some kind of blue flaming balls,wich crushes everything on its way,silkhald,zidane\'s brother ,helps him to save his beautifull city,but evil general gziegfried holds up their troops to battle till end,the entire council becomes killed and zidane and silkhald are pushed to escape for saving their lives
thats pretty much a resume of first chapters(I will \"obviusly will redact it and detail it and all,but ,its a good trame for begin,aint it?


Sorry for been ausent all this time,but,dude darkeness its some serius bussiness....
just kidding just a long vacation and a really long
'duh.....I must do something but I can tell what it is'

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Uh...Your not really EternalDragon are you?
Eternal Dragon would never make that many spelling mistakes.


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Uh...Your not really EternalDragon are you?
Eternal Dragon would never make that many spelling mistakes.


His name is \'eternal dragon\' not \'EternalDragon\'. Probably a fan, or younger brother.

Just do not double post E.D. (Extra Domestical o.o). Meaning: do not post when the last post was also yours.


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that was a friend of mine,wich made me a \"favor\"writting everything I redacted to him,but sure thats part of a book I\'m writting.
I would wish you to take a little of interest on this,because I oftenly fell than you ignore this,yes I\'m concient that know barely nothing,but soon i\'ll bring you all a small sample,direclty taken from the book,just be pacient
pd:does \"DARMARGHAT\" sounds ...you know...cool?make me know

[Edited on 3-12-2005 by eternal dragon]

[Edited on 3-12-2005 by eternal dragon]


Sorry for been ausent all this time,but,dude darkeness its some serius bussiness....
just kidding just a long vacation and a really long
'duh.....I must do something but I can tell what it is'

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whew, just a couple of weeks ausent and you burry my topic...,I finally bringed the prologue of the book I mentioned,here it is...
The Legacy of Darmarghat



In the very beggining of all ages, when the world was a sphere without form nor life, without air that to breathe, without sky to contemplate, when the Earth and the oceans were nothing but that distant shades of the future, and the reign of the nothingness guarded the world, Azthoz, the great God of the beggining and the end gave form to the sacred world that today we know as Darmargath, that in the language of the Gods it means: \"Place where the light is born\". Having already finished the last details of the world, it decided to create a being who would dominate those earths, and so, with the pen of phoenix it began to create the heart of the elves, beautiful beings with eyes of the color of the sky, gilded hair like rays of the great Xiohaz (the sun), with a kind and a soul full of good desires, a great determination, and mainly a heart with the sacred capacity of the power to love its resemblances, but that heart was not perfect since it could easily fall in an abyss of pain and sadness. Once finished elves, Azthoz the wise, left a single task, a mission by which they could live pacifically, the designated task was the one to take care of that beautiful world and to protect it of all evil being, of all those that wished the total dominion of that paradise and to proclaim the power for itselves, although this meant the loss of the life, the death of a loved being, the sentence of a whole nation, or, to lose forever the essence of life, this mission was accepted and carried out during millenia and the elves had a calm life, life that would be eternal in time but could not survive if it lost his same essence, since without it, the soul would be dried, it would be poisoned and all the elvish virtues would be sent to the forgetfulness, it would have the bitterness and the weight of the sentence to a full eternal life of bitterness and eternal pain and the dark. When the elves by any reason would dye(they can only die if a fatal blow in the battle is aimed to them), their souls would be taken to the celestial Court and they would be judged to them to go or not to the paradise or the underworld. In the first of these places its souls they would be in eternal rest, in the legitimate peace of which it is and what it could be, being compensated eternally of its short or long instance in Earth , and would live by the rest of the eternity in the incomparable happiness and the peace that the paradise offers. In the frightful underworld their souls would suffer eternally, even more than when they lose the vital essence, since their bodies would undergo the eternal and terrible torture.



When passing the eras, the elves prospered and had to take good care of that world and protect it from those who wanted to take the control on it. But as in all earth and soul on the world evil began to spread and the peace would not last too much, since Dherengthoz, king of the elves of the northeast had the seed of dischordy growing slowly in its heart, and, with the pass of the ages it wished to take the absolute superiority from the life to himself . It reunited a group of faithfuls followers and in order to create an army, it tortured and it deceived million elves, killing all that whot put in its way, trying not to be discovered by Thentherion, one of the eight guardians of the doors of the sky and heir of the legendary sword...
as the time happened , the army of Dherengthoz became more and more numerous, the world was plunging in an immense sea of darkness and fire, until the day of the ninth eclipse, when the sacred and celestial battle took its first step towards the destruction of the world, Dherengthoz defied the Gods and the eight guardians and so then the war began.
After thousand of years of conflicts and battles, Dherengthoz accomplished its purpose, now the world was under its complete dominion, but when the hour of the sentence it seemed near more and more, a hope ray was pronounced, it was then when Gil-Alendrox demonstrated its courage and, grasping the sword of Thentherion it attacked ferociously to Dherengthoz, finally destroying the dark kingdom that governed in those dark days and brought of return the freedom.
The Gods damned the dark elves to lose their soul forever and to not being able to rest until somehow they pay for its treason.
After numerous decades the Heroic Gil-Alendrox fell in love with a woman and procreated two children. It lived happily until from the supporters of the dark lord wanted to take the control from the world again, the war did not last too much, but Alendrox was assassinated by the greater and more faithful servant of the dark lord. His son Silkhald at behold the glorious death of his father ,he swore to revenge someday and, leaving the kingdom of its father in the distance, it began to learn to handle the dark arts, ignoring tan that would dominate their destiny for always during the rest of the ages and time..



make me know your oppinion:D


Sorry for been ausent all this time,but,dude darkeness its some serius bussiness....
just kidding just a long vacation and a really long
'duh.....I must do something but I can tell what it is'

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I am not going to read this.
You continue to double and triple post (F.Y.I., we just set another desk on fire)
plus, I second the conjecture that you are not eternal dragon. You have quice broken the rules.
Your story was kinda bad too.


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eternal dragon
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c\'mon man!!! give it a chance, not all books born glorius, people made them glorius reading them.
about double posting:youre right,I wont double post ever again, next time I\'ll just edit the last message.
PD:you all were right, that wasn\'t me, it was Letal 84,(Does someone remember that guy?)he convinced me to post this and know what do they think of it
friends of writter couldn\'t tell him the true, so he asked me to do this. give it a chance guys, it wont hurt anyone,I swear.

allright, aparently, nobody has ever readed this, but somebody will when the book be published,

[Edited on 11-1-2006 by eternal dragon]


Sorry for been ausent all this time,but,dude darkeness its some serius bussiness....
just kidding just a long vacation and a really long
'duh.....I must do something but I can tell what it is'