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This is pretty short I kno but I always thought this would be cool.

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War of the Net

Protoman was standing the battlefield surveying the carnage, when a ball hit and smashed the rock he was standing on. He quickly found the Heal navi that had thrown it ,and with on quick motion deleted him. This battle was theirs ,but right as Protoman was about logout he heard a rumbling in the distance, perhaps Nebula finally had something worthwhile to fight.
“Excuse me Protoman,” said Searchman. Protoman stood to the side as he watched the head of his snipers take aim at thin air.
BAM!
As Searchman shot Protoman could see data swirling about from deleted navis where he had shot. Now on closer inspection Protoman saw a massive object coming closer and closer. Protoman smirked perhaps they would have something new. The smirk on his face disappeared when he saw what the object really was. It appeared to be a gun approximately 20 times the height of a Heal navi, and 40 wide. There was no time to waste he had to kill the navis pushing it before it could get in range of his army. Traveling as fast as he could, Protoman reached the gun in seconds and found that this gun was not only pushed by heal navis, but darkloids as well.
“Metalman?” radioed Protoman.
“Yes sir?” came the reply.
“I need you and three of your finest men here ASAP”
“Yes sir, I’ll be at the gun as soon as possible.”
“Now to business,” Protoman muttered. Seeing what looked like the leader of the navis pushing the gigantic gun , Protoman advanced. The sword flew but, a mere quarter of an inch away from its target it froze. Protoman felt a surge of energy rush through his body as he was paralyzed.
“I can’t let you do that,” said a hollow voice.
“Neither can I!” came a gruff voice from Metalman. “Metal Break!” The white fist of iron smashed straight through Flashman’s defense.
“Uh-oh, Umm, Neon Lights!” Flashman yelled.
Meanwhile Protoman was making short work of the Heal navis. As his sword flew to another, it was stopped in midair by another sword. Protoman looked up to see Swordman. Smirking Protoman quietly downloaded a anti-sword ,then opened his defenses. Not knowing what to do Swordman slashed out at Protoman ,only for him to disappear and reappear behind. With three quick slashes Protoman forced Swordman to logout.
“Kingdom Crusher!” came from Knightman as his ball and chain deleted a score of Heal navis. Shots bounced of Knightman’s armor as he continued to delete in sweeping motions with his wrecking ball. Knightman realized that the gun was now almost in range of the army. Quickly he made his way to the front of the gun and put all of his weight (which was tremendous) on the gun attempting to push it in the opposite direction. It started to move the opposite way slowly at first but then faster and faster. Then something appeared out of thin air. It was a statue of some sort ,but Knightman now realized with horror that it was an anubis! That could only mean one thing! As his strength began to diminish from the powerful rays Knightman turned, and sure enough stood Pharohman with his palm outstretched. Simultaneously two blades hit Pharohman. Both Protoman and Colonel had their blades on Pharohman , the two were about to strike again ,but Pharohman logged out.
“We need to get on top of this thing!” Protoman said to Colonel.
“And I know who could,” Colonel said with a grin as two Bird-like navis swooped by. “You two! Whatever makes that gun work get it out of it!” Colonel yelled to Falconman and Larkman. The two navis began to work a huge cylinder out of the gun around where the ammo might be, They tossed it on the ground and peered inside the gun . The navi that appeared to be operating it was none other than Bubbleman.
“You, get outt’a there!” Larkman yelled into the gun.
“Ahhhhhh!” screamed Bubbleman in his high-pitched girl-like scream.

BUBBLEMAN LOGGING OUT

“Protoman, look at this,” said Colonel while holding the cylinder.
“They’re Darkchips!” exclaimed Protoman, “it’s a good thing couldn’t shoot any of these at us. This battle is done. Falconman check the area for wounded and get them to Meddy.

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Meanwhile, in the real world.

“This just came in, it appears that the Electopia area has been recently secured by none other than Chaud and his navi Protoman. Our forces have pushed them back ,but according to Mr. Famous we have a long way to go before we can drive them back into the undernet. As another reminder the black chips that are called Darkchips should never be used no matter what. They will corrupt your navi and turn them to the Nebula forces. If you happen to bring a Darkchips into the net police they will reward you with 25,000 zennies.”
The boy that had been watching Ribitta’s report turned it off. He did not think that it was fair that his mother would not let him fight in the war. His good friend Toru had joined with his net navi Iceman and then there was Lan Hikari, his navi Megaman was a general! He and his navi Lightingman could help so much. The boy’s name was James. He had deep green eyes stood 5 feet 4 inches, he had his hair buzzed and had a small birthmark on the back of his hand that looked like a lighting bolt.
“You look like you got nothin to do, maybe we could go on the net,” suggested Lightingman.
“Sure, why not. JACK IN LIGHTINGMAN, POWERUP!”
Lightingman began to walk around when he noticed a glint in the air. Walking forward he could see it was at the same level of the path. He had only heard of the invisible paths but, could this really be one? Lightingman stretched out his hand carefully onto the glint. Sure enough it was solid.
“I don’t think it would be a good idea if someone saw us so here’s an invis,” James said. James lost sight of Lightingman completely as he was Invisible and on a invisible path. Slowly Lightingman crept his way along the path until he reached a portal. Tacitly they both agreed that they should check it out. Lightingman was whisked away and finally landed in an area that appeared to have completely white paths suspended above water.
“I’ve never seen anything like this before, it’s completely well, beautiful,” said Lightingman. He made his way along paths passing broken monoliths and hacked security firewalls. Exiting the area he found to his immense surprise that he heard voices! Not just voices but some cries of pain! Quickly and quietly, Lightingman made his way to the cries. They were not cries of help however, but cries of pain , and in the middle of these hurt navis were two unharmed. James and Lightingman recognized them immediately as Roll and Meddy from the news. Had they found the secret base of the ”Netfighters” ?
“Hey kid, how did you find this place? You’re not supposed to be here!” yelled Japanman.
“Uh-oh! Please try to understand…” but Lightingman was cut off by Japanman.
“You’re going to the queen!”
“But I…”
“Shut up,” said Japanman. Lightingman was roped and began to be pulled by Japanman.
“I will not let this happen to you Lightingman! Burner battle chip in!” yelled James. Lightingman broke free and jabbed at Japanman with an electrosword. It was blocked by Japanman’s spear and he retorted with a swift cut to the leg.
“Ahh!” screamed Lightingman. “I’m glad James and I saved up money for this! Stepcross triple download! P.A.!” Lightingman started to disappear and reappear, each time severely cutting Japanman.
If it had been possible to logout in the area Japanman would have, instead he fainted.
“Hold it right there!\" a loud female voice yelled out.


[Edited on 18-12-2005 by Ribitta]

[Edited on 19-12-2005 by Ribitta]

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i see another Morphman coming up :lol:

no really this is pretty good


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Really good Ribitta, I see that you like making new people on that.


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Nice one Ribitta, a fine start. ;)
But I advise you to - even though your grammar and spelling is remarkably well - to use proper punctuation. At some points, I saw that a \',\' would have been nice.

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i see another Morphman coming up :lol:

no really this is pretty good


What\'s that supposed to mean? That\'s it a good story, building by the chapter, well thought and all, but is ultimately doomed to fall into the pit of unfinished fanfics?


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i see another Morphman coming up :lol:

no really this is pretty good


What\'s that supposed to mean? That\'s it a good story, building by the chapter, well thought and all, but is ultimately doomed to fall into the pit of unfinished fanfics?


no no no, i mean it\'s a good fanfic.
because you stopped doesn\'t have anything to do with it


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When are you going to post Ch. #2?

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Ok I\'m glad you liked it:D and here is the second chapter:

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Lightingman froze with terror, the words that had been spoken made it seem that it was imperative to follow them. The water beneath him started flashing red as the alarm went off. He could not believe his eyes, the navi that stood before him had tremendous amounts of power coming from her and two purple semi-circles stood floating behind her. Snapping her fingers, Lightingman flew before her. There was a flash of light and Lightingman realized, he was on a battle field.
“Well Lightingman, it looks we’re gunna have to fight this one,” James said.
“Yah, but I’ve never seen this much power before from one net navi!” said Lightingman. In a blink of an eye the battle had started. The woman stood there for a second then began to advance at incredible speeds. Lightingman knew she must have weakness, and attacking would be the only way to find out. Now, Lightingman began to charge too, with his elecsword. He sliced, however in one smooth motion the female stepped to the side, spun the semi-circles at the attack, throwing Lightingman onto the ground. He began to steam as if he had been on fire and immediately doused with cold water. He got up but heavily wounded, only to be thrown into the air by appearing spheres of energy. Lightingman didn’t know how much more of this he could take. Then he realized something, when she had blocked his attack she had to move to do so. Then he had an idea. “Geddon 2 and airshoes battle chips in!” yelled Lightingman as the ground began to brake all around him however, he was floating in the air. The woman was trapped! Advancing quickly over the broken floor, Lightingman came in front of her. “Herosword, battle chip in!” A large sword appeared on Lightingman’s arm. He slashed once, twice, thrice! Each took there mark well but did not seem to affect her. She grinned, the panels were turning back to normal; she ran forward, put her palm out, and whirlwind flew forward knocking out Lightingman.
“Congratulations, Serenade,” said Japanman, “but did you really expect him to win?”
“No, but he put up a good fight. Make sure he is treated well, I hope he will join us,” Serenade replied.

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Dendome~

Lan Hikari walked into the stadium. It brought back good memories, this was the place where he and Megaman had one a great tournament. He looked to the platform. That was where he had fought: Aquaman, Fireman, Numberman, Gutsman, and several others. Not only that, but this was where Megaman’s soul had first communicated giving him double soul. Lan looked to the vacant seats, in his ears he could just hear them cheering for him. Coming here refreshed Lan and Megaman considering how much work they had been doing lately. Lan closed his eyes for a second, and when he reopened them he found that all the colors were blurred. Then he realized that he was in dimensional area!
“Uh-oh!” said Lan and Megaman at the same time. “Well let’s do this Crossfusion!” Lan’s clothes began to become plated with Megaman’s armor. Then came the helmet, closely followed by the rest.
“I’ll call for backup,” Megaman said inside Lan’s body.
“Good idea it looks as if Darkman is here,” replied Lan as all light began to fade away. It was not just Darkman though, as Lan and Megaman were soon to find out the next battle would be here.
Chaud and Protoman quickly came, followed closely by: Baryl and Colonel, Tamawko and Metalman, and Searchman and Raika. They spread out quickly to find the darkloids that were hiding.
Baryl/Colonel (I’ll just call’em Colonel) slipped quietly along the narrow passages below the stands. The place had not been used since the tournament six months ago. Pipes on the ceiling were leaking, and broken. It was a sordid type of place that no one would normally want to go, and that was why Colonel was down there. Something was not right. It was all too quiet. Was it possible the darkloids did not know they were there? Then Colonel heard it. At first it was just a little clinking noise. Then it grew louder, and louder! Until finally it sounded as if something was incessantly slamming something. Now loud roars were coming from just behind the wall where Colonel.
“Screen device!” Colonel yelled as he slashed the wall. The concrete crumbled from the impact and Colonel stood face to face with Beastman and about One hundred other navis behind him. All of a sudden one of the Heal navis arms got shot off! Then Protoman jumped down killing five! Several more navis replaced these as the fight began. Three large holes opened and countless bats flew out. It was as they feared, Darkman was here! Beastman shot out his razor claws slashing Colonel. He retaliated by taking his cape, rapping Beastman in it, and stabbing him three or four times. Terribly wounded, Beastman logged out. Triumphantly Colonel ran forward and hit Darkman with Cross Device. The enraged Darkman turned on Colonel. Right as he was about to strike Megaman jumped down and used a counter chip. As Darkman was momentarily stunned Searchman took aim. However right before he shot he was shot by a jet of blue fire issuing from Burnerman. Burnerman grinned, and used his Burning Jets move and charged for Searchman. He never made it ,for the second before Searchman was hit, Metalman’s fist collided with Burnerman. Burnerman probably flew about 100 feet before he even started to fall.
Darkman, as good as he was, was having the fight of his life. Perhaps it was because that he was fighting Protoman and Colonel, or it could have simply been that he was being double teamed. While his bats kept them busy he was constantly shooting beams of paralyzing fire. Finally he managed to paralyze them both. Just as he was about to deal the final stroke a shuriken flew into his back. Shadowman landed lightly behind Darkman and pulled out his sword, Muramasa. Nimbly, Shadowman ran towards Darkman and buried the blade into Darkman’s back.
Now that they had rid themselves of the enemy’s leader the rest would be easy. Megaman had already taken out almost all the Heal navis. However, before the job could be finished the dimensional area generators were shut down.



[Edited on 19-12-2005 by Ribitta]

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Crossfusioned people have the name of their Navi with an R before it, \'kay. Like: R Colonel, R ProtoMan, R Roll, R... METTAUR?!? o.O


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Crossfusioned people have the name of their Navi with an R before it, \'kay. Like: R Colonel, R ProtoMan, R Roll, R... METTAUR?!? o.O

M\'kay thanks, and one reason why these are so short would be due to the fact that I don\'t know how to type >_<. BUt the next one should be commin soon, but as of now it\'s only a page long.

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When are you going to post Ch. #3?

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Not bad, not bad at all.


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Ch. #3 when are you going to post it?

[Edited on 24-12-2005 by django]

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Crossfusioned people have the name of their Navi with an R before it, \'kay. Like: R Colonel, R ProtoMan, R Roll, R... METTAUR?!? o.O
R Mettaur?!
I gotta re-read that.
If there\'s a mettaur as a more-than-minor character, then I\'m definitely hooked. Like putting ninjas in a movie.
Oh-yes, I hate to be intrusive, put Shadowman in there.
Other than that, everything\'s really nice. I like it.


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Arghh sorry it\'s taken a while, Christmas and all but here is chapter three:

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Protoman was walking in an area that the floor was the same color as the walls, black. He walked for what felt like ages until he saw a small patch of light. In the light was a silhouette. On closer inspection Protoman found that the navi had two arms a head and huge body. As Protoman got closer and closer; the navi got bigger and bigger. Right as Protoman reached the figure everything turned from black to white, and Protoman found that he was looking at the infamous Duo!

“This can’t be,” said Protoman quietly. “You were deleted.
“ Maybe, but I am here to give you a message,” replied Duo.
“And what would that be?”
“Your operator, Eugene Chaud, will die if you do not stop something.”
“T-this can’t be! What must I stop?”
“ First, you will need these:” Duo said. Then Duo’s body split into a thousand tiny Darkchips. “Once you use these, go to the undernet, you must destroy it.”
“If it will save Chaud,” said Protoman weakly as he reached for a darkchip.
“No!” yelled Chaud as he sat up straight in his bed sweating like a dog. “I-it was only a dream,” he said relieved. Chaud looked at the clock, it was Six-o’clock A.m.. He got up and put his clothes on, then put the sleeping Protoman into his holder on his belt. Grabbing a quick something to eat he left the manor.

The manor was huge, it had worn stone walls that had been through countless generations, it was such an edifice and an unoccupied place most people avoided it, as well as Chaud as much as he could. Inside was much more glorious looking than the outside. Most hallways had countless pictures on the wall as well as velvet carpet on the floor. It was possible that only the architects knew how many rooms there were, for to Chaud he found a new one every week. The doors were different wood for every level, Maple on the first, Oak on the second, Pine on the third, Willow on the fourth, Sequoyah on the fifth, Birch on the sixth, and Cherrie on the seventh. There was one door however, which was made out of steel. Chaud had never been in this room before as his father forbade him to go into it. Because the manor was so big it was eerie to be in if you did not know your way or you were by your self. Staircases were made of marble shined to a point that you felt bad to walk on them sometimes. The most amazing thing about it though was the court yard. Unlike most court yards this one did not start on the first level. In fact it began on the third. Although it was suspended above the ground one wouldn’t think so. It had been made to look entirely natural. Spurring this feeling was the trees. The trees varied from giant oaks to tiny Japanese Maples. There was even a fountain in the middle. Apart from all these wonders was the flowers, some you might never have seen. The colors of these lighted up the court yard immensely. This courtyard was defiantly the most cheery part of the whole manor.(Phew, finally done with that)

Chaud rounded a corner towards the metro line. He had know idea where he was going but, he did this almost every morning. As he thought “Anywhere is better than here” Chaud bought a ticket to Scilab. On arrival Chaud veered off to the docks.

Protoman now fully awake after the bumpy ride on the metro line asked, “Any plans Chaud?”
“No, Protoman, but perhaps we could see someone we know,” Chaud said with a grin as he headed to the boat that had just come in. “Hello Axle,”(don’t know if this is from anything but I am totally making this character up)Chaud said, his face was now considerably brighter and a little red.
“Chaud? I’m surprised to see you right when I got back from Creamland. So, how is it goin?” the girl replied.
“Things are goin great. What about you?”
“Me too, hey, I haven’t been here in a while so how about you show me what’s new?”
“Umm sure,” said Chaud a little nervously.
“Great! So let’s go,” Axle said and together they walked off towards the metro line. Axel was a very cheerful girl, she had shoulder-length black hair and brown eyes. An auto-didact from birth she had had no school education. It would have been hard for her to get to school as her father had disappeared and her mother had died when she was five. Recently she ad been to Creamland to investigate what ad happened to her father. Unfortunateley she had found no evidence. Axle had met Chaud after she came home one day and found that the people would no let a child stay in an apartment. When she had gone out side she found that it was pouring. She had run to the nearest shelter which just so happened to be Chaud manner. Now thirteen years old and she was taking care of herself.

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Secret area- training ground

Kendoman’s sword slashed through a bag of sand. He turned around striking another, then another, until they were finally all gone.
“Well done ,Kendoman,” said Gridman gruffly. “All right, I supose that it’s my turn.” Several iron plates came down. Gridman slid his visor down and slammed and shattered target after target. Within mere seconds all the targets were gone.
“Amateurs,” came Metalman’s voice, “I’ll show how it’s done.” Once again all the targets fell to the ground. In literally half a second Metalman threw his gears, shot rockets, and slammed the ground causing a massive tremor. All the targets were destroyed. Watching all this Gridman and Kendoman’s jaw dropped. Metalman walked away with a smile.

“You two, come with me,” Serenade said. Gridman and Kendoman did as they were told following her to the area for new recruits. Five navis stood there, each greatly frightened immensely of Serenade. “They’re too scared of me, I want you to show them around,” and with that Serenade left.
“So, what are your names?” Kendoman asked.
“I’m Razor,” said one.
“I’m Lance,” said another.
“I’m Aimman,” said one.
“I’m Phoenix,” siad another, this one a little more confident than the rest.
“And I’m Mina,” said a little girl timidly.
“Well, we’re glad to have you with us, now what are you interests in working?” inquired Gridman. It turned out that Razor and Lance were fine with just being soldiers, Aimman though was an excellent sniper, Phoenix was a good scout and Mina wished to be a medic. They were shown there way around and just as they were settling in, the alrarm went off. A large picture of Serenade’s head appeared in the water.
“Attention, squad A and B are to move as quickly as possible to the global area,” Serenade said firmly ,but now with a bit of a smile said,”we’re pushing them back.
“Looks like I got some new recruits,” said Megaman looking at the newbies. Megaman was the head of squad A. Besides the new recruits his squad normally consisted of: Punk, Toadman, Sharkman, Tomahawkman, Skullman, Woodman, Turboman, Windman, Roll, Flareman, Foxman, and two hundred normal navis. Now, squad B was normally led by Protoman, but since he was gone Django had taken over. In his squad was:Larkman, Falconman, Metalman, Knightman, Dartman, Searchman, Pyroman, Ironman, Snakeman, Meddy, and two hundred normal navis.

Four hundred and twenty seven navis all appeared in the global area at once. Looking forward they saw who they were against. Megaman followed a special rule of his own, if he was the head of the army, then he would be the first one to start in the fighting and the last to leave. Now was no exception, “Metalsoul!” Megaman yelled. His body armor morphed into that of Metalsoul’s. He ran forward fist in the air and smashed straight through five navis, the fighting for global area had begun.

Megaman flipped backwards and in the air changed to Protosoul. He ran forward striking with his sword slaying three navis, that’s when he saw it. Standing before him was a figure in a torn cloak; he was hovering slightly above the ground. So far the figure had done nothing, but now it appeared to be taking off his cloak. Bass raised his two arms, each morphing into a buster then he unleashed the power. A huge dent was blown into the ranks of the net warriors as the blobs of light and energy flew through many navis. As Bass was about to strike again, someone had just jacked in and appeared to be stopping Bass’ attacks. It was none other than Serenade. With an awesome (not as in cool, but magnificent) blow Serenade struck towards Bass. The whole battle had stopped to look at the two. No one knew how she could do it but she sent a telepathic message to Megaman to keep fighting. Megaman signled to his troops and they began to fight again, striking the enemy off its guard. The battle was not as strong as it could have been seeing as all the soldiers were keeping one eye on the two leaders.

Django flipped over a few enemies, rapidly firing his gundesol into enemy navis. Then he saw his true enemy, Shademan. Django began to run towards Shademan as fast as he could, nothing would get in his way between him, and his prey. Meanwhile the unexpecting vampire was firing sonic booms at his adversaries. As he ran, Django reached in side his coat and drew out in one hand a silver cross, and in the other hand a stake. The moment before he was attacked Shademan saw Django, this was however the last thing he would ever see for long time. Imobolized by the cross the stake was driven threw his back and his data shoved into a coffin. Seeing the defeat of Shademan half of the evil navis jacked out, they had heard the stories of him how he had survived all, but to see him be defeated was to much. Megaman, now as Windsoul began to sweep his enemies away with a fan.

Meanwhile, Serenade and Bass fought heavily. Neither of them seemed to have taken much damage as both of there defenses were suberb.

Then without any notion, Bass pulled a chip from under his cloak, “Gospel fusion, battle chip, download!” All of Bass’ wounds were fused together and mass amounts of energy began to radiate from him. “Gospel cannon!” he yelled as his arms fused together into a fiery head. However, the second before he was about to fire it, a shot as bright as the sun pierced through his Dark Aura. This was followed many more shots. Then Megaman ran towards Bass with a Lifesword and nocked out Bass’ aura. “Retreat!” yelled Bass as he logged out.

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You\'re getting better.


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I\'m glad you like it, I better get started on my next chapter.

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O yah ch4. More to reeeaaddd.:eek::eek: Soo good.:eek:

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\"Hmm... the subject is showing progress, Herr Doctor.\" =P

Okay, commenting, right.
First off, I see you have put somewhere (dunno where exactly) you said \"greatly\" then some word, and then \"immensely\". You don\'t have to do that, that\'s a double effect, totally unneccasery.
Next, Navis. Hmm... AimMan, FlareMan, Foxman... =P
Lastly, BASS IS TEH COOPERATING ZOMGZWTFLOLZZ!!!1! o_o


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O yah ch4. More to reeeaaddd.:eek::eek: Soo good.:eek:
No need to be that inthusiastic

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Nice job Ribitta I have to admit you got my attention on this one.


Hey beautiful people, you're better off trying to e-mail me than message me on here.

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O yah ch4. More to reeeaaddd.:eek::eek: Soo good.:eek:
No need to be that inthusiastic


I just like to read magaman stories btu this one is one of the best!:D

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O yah ch4. More to reeeaaddd.:eek::eek: Soo good.:eek:
No need to be that inthusiastic


I just like to read *megaman* stories *but* this one is one of the best!:D

This is nothing compared to what Morph wrote.

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That sooo long and good.:D

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Ok well the next one will take a bit longer seeing I\'m trying to do a bunch of stuff right now.

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Like home-work.:mad::mad::cry:

[Edited on 10-1-2006 by django]

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- Cryogenics lab

“Doctor, you can’t expect to be able to revive him from the cryo tube, it’s never been done before. Besides, why go to all this expense, you’re tampering with death!”

“Why go to all the expense? Because I love him!, and tampering with death you might call it, but I think it’s more of a second chance for him. As for the cryo part, it was the only way to keep him alive! And the only reason no one has ever been revived is because they have hardly tried!

“The net may be a strong point for you, but medical things aren’t! You could possibly put him into extreme pain or perhaps even mess up his brain!”

“It would be better to have his brain messed up than for him to not be able to use it at all! However the cure is almost ready, just a few more tests… ”
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“Mom, I have decided I’m going to join with the net warriors,” James said confidently.

“We’ve been over this before James,” said the boy’s mother hardly even looking up.

“Mom, before when I asked you it was just that I wanted to be like almost everyone else, but something has happened, I found out something I wasn’t supposed to know about the net warriors, and now I basically have to go,” said James.

“You mean forced?” said James’ mother in shock.

“Basically, yah, not to mention that Lightingman and I could be very helpful, and it’s not really dangerous for me at all. I would be just helping Lightingman,” James said with determination.

“I suppose you don’t have much of a choice, besides what I say probably wouldn’t stop you,” said the mother biting her lip.

“Thanks Mom,” said James “I’ll be home every night.” And with that James left to the registration for the army.

James walked up to the booth, “ I guess this is where we sign up, Jack in Lightingman power up!” Lightingman made his way to a familiar navi. “Long time no see Japanman,” said Lightingman friendly.

“Oh it’s you, come with me,” Japanman said as he made his way toward the edge of the net and walked off disappearing from sight. Lightingman followed uneasily towards the edge and stepped. It was a portal which immediately took him to a familiar area, the secret area. He caught sight of Japanman turning a corner and ran after him. The second he turned the corner he ran straight into the back of Japanman. “This is where we train, now show me, and the bags what you got.”

“Yah, ok,” said Lightingman confidently. “Am I allowed to use chips?”

“Yes.”

The bags dropped forming a ring around Lightingman, but he was not in the circle. He had moved at lighting speed and gotten out of the trap. Guns unfolded from the bags and began to shoot toward the middle of the circle, however since there was nobody there the bags destroyed themselves. The second round of bags came down, these had swords sticking out and the were spinning in circles. The bags began to move across the ground toward Lightingman. He jumped, shot a rabbi ring at each of the bags, and then downloaded a elecsword and finished the bags off.

“Impressive, but now try me,” said Japanman as he rushed toward Lightingman.

“I beat you once I can beat you again!” said Lightingman. Japanman thrust his spear at Lightingman , but right before it hit, it stopped. He found to his surprise that Lightingman was holding the spear from going any farther. Lightingman snapped the spear in two. Japanman only gaped. Then, with a magnificent blow from a cyber-sword Japanman went flying.

“Very well, I will take you to Serenade to receive your ranking,” said Japanman reluctantly.

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~ Scilab

“Well Dad, will it work?” Lan asked his dad.

“It should, but it will change the net forever,” said Dr. Hikari. Dr. Hikari had come up with an idea a month earlier. He thought that during this “War of the Net” it was terrible to have navis march towards each other and fight with Napoleonic tactics (Revolutionary war style). The reason though that things had to be fought this way was because the net had no landscape. “If this works, it will greatly put the war to our advantage, seeing as I’ll know all the landscape and we can use it to our advantage. There is a minor drawback though, it is very small and nothing that you and Megaman can’t correct.”

“What is it Dad?” Lan asked.

“You must take Megaman to every net area that I tell you to and put a container in the middle of the area. Once you do that I will be able to start the process for that area.”
“No problem Dad, Megaman and I can do it!”

“That’s the spirit, now put these into your PET and start with the acdc areas.”

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“Well, now that we have landscape we will begin our first mock battle here, as Megaman is absent Colonel will take his place and will go against Protoman. Real force is to be used however deletion of another navi will result in ban from this “test”. Now let us begin!” said Serenade.

“Alright, let’s this started with a little defense, M Cannon quad download!” Protoman said as four cannons came down and Protoman instructed a few navis to man them. “Searchman!”

“Yes?”

“I need you to find out what they are doing over there and see if any of them are coming,”

“No can do, they have already set up a ray of plasma and it’s stopping my scope from seeing over there.?

“In that case, send Larkman and Falconman over there to see what is going, they cannot be spotted!”

“Yes’r”

Minutes later the two navis returned. “What took so long?” Protoman inquired.

“My apologize sir, we ran into another scout and had to subdue him,” Larkman said.

“I see , did you found the source of the plasma shield?”

“Yes’r it appears to be being held by as to give it a maximum range,” Larkman said.

“And it is being held by Colonel,” Falconman chimed in.

“In that case send in Ironman, Snakeman, Metalman, Knightman, and one-hundred normal navis.”

“Sure, but who is going to lead them?” Falconman asked curiously.

“I will, I want them ready in five minutes,” Protoman said.

“It will be done,” and with that, Larkman and Falconman flew off.

Protoman had only fought Colonel once and they had tied. Now that both of them were much stronger than before Protoman was curious how it would turn out. Even though Protoman had a higher rank than Colonel it was not because he had a higher skills, it was just that Colonel thought it would be weird if his name was Colonel, but he was General. Protoman remembered though that when he had fought Colonel, Colonel had managed to pull off an amazing move. When Protoman had attempted to use Delta Ray he had to go in front of Colonel to attack, and that is exactly the milli-second that Colonel had chosen to use Cross Device. Stunned from this Colonel than had wrapped his cape around Protoman and attacked viciously with his sword. Protoman knew he would have to watch for these.

“Sir, your troops are ready,” said huffed Larkman.

“Excellent,” Protoman replied and went towards his troops. He ordered them into formation and they began to sneak towards the enemies base. Protoman peered over a hill and saw he was looking strait down on a sleeping guard. Protoman told his men and they began to move quietly over the sleeping Toadman. All of a sudden Knightman sank into the ground, Protoman was paralyzed, and Metalman was hit in the back of the head. Toadman grinned.

“Ribiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit!” yelled Toadman and 150 normal navis popped up as well as Punk, Windman, Foxman, and Flareman.

“Where is Protoman?” asked Windman looking around. Sure enough he was gone from where he had been paralyzed.

“Aaaack!” screamed 25 normal navis, and they all looked to the hole in their chest. From 300 cyber meters away Searchman knew his target had hit.

Protoman watched in horror as Toadman began to terrorize the navis trying to get information out of them. Finally one started giving fake information, Protoman was proud of him. All the hostile navis now were looking toward the “traitor”. Protoman new this was his chance, “Delta Ray” he murmured. The navis had no idea what had hit them, Protoman was popping up everywhere and violently attacking. After Delta Ray wore of he used a shadow 3 chip. Now the enemy was really scared. They saw Protoman’s shadow but not him. He continued striking with his sword until another sword hit him. Colonel began moving at blinding speeds towards Protoman, until he appeared right behind Protoman and used his Blind Rain Shower attack.

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This one\'s fine. However, I think the numbers of the \'squads\' are a little large. (Weren\'t they quite small in Napoleon\'s Armée?) 100 Normal Navis. I\'d think I\'d have a dozen or groups of 25 with a costumized Navi as leader. But it\'s up to you to make that up. =)

Oh and \"He knew his target had hit\"? I think that\'s supposed to be \"He knew his target had been hit\". >>


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Ok thanks for the tips, microsoft works spelling check is screwing up too >_<.

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It\'s still good.


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