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here we go a new comic that actually relates to the stroy it\'s a miracle also on the first page

http://img111.imageshack.us/img111/500/comic7g1rk.png

is it any good?

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I still think you could do with some capitalization and punctuation. Other than that, pretty much textbook comedy. Nothing wrong with that.

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ahh!i missed the second panels capatilization and i\'m horrible with punctuation but i\'ll try none the less

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I love it.


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Rioni... thanks for the Final-Zero music..

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oh thanks and from now on you can find my joke comics in the MY SPRITES thread

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oh thanks and from now on you can find my joke comics in the MY SPRITES thread
Okay, then.


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yep the newest one involves a hospital setting no nothing about a sick joke just something to piss off azreal

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yep the newest one involves a hospital setting no nothing about a sick joke just something to piss off azreal
Crap! What\'d you do?! Oh... flu season..


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braiiiiiins braiiiiins the topic wants braiiiiins lol i\'ve brought my comic back from the dead

http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/3782/megamansrant6ib.png

mostly a filler comic but hey better than nuthin right also on the first page

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Heheheh. Not bad Darkflame. :)


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yes the dead topic has risen again*bows*

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braiiiiiins braiiiiins the topic wants braiiiiins lol i\'ve brought my comic back from the dead

http://img76.imageshack.us/img76/3782/megamansrant6ib.png

mostly a filler comic but hey better than nuthin right also on the first page


I can\'t see it good enough, it\'s too small. Can ya make it bigger?


~Juno~


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wow last update was in march...well i'm back if you want more comics just post here and i'll see what my twisted mind can think up

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I request a RE4 one or another with your guy, Darkflame.EXE I belive it was, please?

Edited by Blazen on July 7, 2006 at 17:18:40.


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update right here and on the front page as well enjoy...not my best work but i havn't done this in a while

http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/5791/comic86km.png

Edited by Darkflame on July 12, 2006 at 8:41:14.

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Haha, nice job. :D


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"You fat retard." Nice!


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Haha!Nice job!Was that bass?Did he became a virus?

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You're not great. But you are pretty good. You've definitely got potential. I'll admit that I found one or two jokes a little dumb, but that's still a better count than we usually see 'round these parts. When capitalization and grammar are mastered, that'll improve things by so much too. I think that some parts could be be tweaked so the timing is different too, but otherwise, keep up the good work.

But so far, I think #3 is your best work. I kind of imagined Light saying his piece quickly, and right after MM.

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update

http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/2895/comic9r4ir.png

Edited by Darkflame on July 14, 2006 at 5:12:44.

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The plot thinkins....


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