Hi, remeber way back when I started a story on here. Yeah, well guess what. I've improved since then, alot! Now, before anyone thinks. "Yay, Blazen's writing a story on here, yay, yay, yay." Well your wrong, somewhat. I am writing a story, but I am only showing the first chapter until finished. Then afterwards I'll update it everyweek once the prequals are up after thier updated. I know your thinking, "just show us the prequals then". Like I said they need tuning up, and what I'll show you won't have any spoilers from the previous ones, just the opening to the new characters for this story.I wanrted to show this because, I feel it needs acurate critisism before I continue. By the way this is a Legend of Zelda fanfic. If that is no permited, then by all means lock it. Enjoy the first chapter of "The Hier of Evil."

The Heir of Evil
A Sequel to a Threat from a Different Dimension
By:Blazen
Chapter 1: Realization

“Again another day I sit here. Again I sit and wait for nothing, just for death to take me. I sit to see the darkness before me and to have a conversation with boredom. Oh, how I despise the day I snuck down into the Grave of the Kings, if only I had been wearier and avert myself from this sanctuary. Oh, how I wish to see my world once more, up above, to see the sun once more. Never again though, never again…..” Sighed a man as he started what seemed another hour of darkness. He wandered into the Kings’ grave and was cursed to be their guardian forevermore. He stood up from his stone of which he sat and slept on. His black armor clanged quietly not disturbing the peace; he ran his hand through his jet-black hair smoothing it out as if to look presentable for someone that isn’t coming. He always looked at the stone cold door leading to the outside world. It was stained with yellow scribbles of the past; they were barely seen within the darkness of the corridor. However one design remained untouched by time it was a triangle, no, three to make one, in the middle though there was an empty space of an upside down triangle. It was only a space, none of particular purpose, unlike the three triangles. The top was one of power, the right of wisdom, the left of courage. They all made the very power that created this beautiful land, Hyrule. The triangle was the one called the Triforce, it, with the help of the goddesses, Din, Nayru, and Farore the very creators of the Triforce. The man sighed again looking away from the stone wall, and into the corridor of which he lived in. It was covered with dust and cobwebs; he never bothered to clean the place up.
He always just waited for the day to end and for him to sleep, his only escape from the world. He waited and waited and waited for that time, but it always seemed so far.
Beyond the doors of the graves were many other corridors, and hidden from his knowledge to him, they were invaded by an evil man and his minions. A man with black hair, glasses, and a black cloak entered the last corridor before the graves.
“I’m finally here. Before the doors to ultimate power!” Said the man. “Moblins, open the door for your master.” The creatures similar to goblins, but much larger; ran to the door and pushed against it slowly opening it; the stones made a scratching noise as they moved it forward. The guardian looked at the door and reached for his sword on his belt at his right hip. He drew it swiftly and waited for the invaders to show themselves. He evil man on the other side saw the guardian and held out his hand to the side, a large bright blue sword appeared; it had yellow marks on it written in ancient Hyrulian. The doors opened completely finally and the two men stared at each other. The moblins charged the man with lances that had red string on the end of the handle. The guardian blocked one of them and cut open its stomach, blood flowed out as it fell, dead. The second tried to stab him but he jumped on the lance and ran to it cutting its head off. The evil man smiled in amusement at the guardian’s flawless tactics. The guardian ran to the evil man and attacked his side; the evil one blocked it with his enormous sword. The evil man threw the sword over him to his other side along with the guardian. The guardian fell on his stomach and tried to stand after a moment. He stumbled to his feet and ran to the intruder and attacked him vertically the evil man blocked it in a blade lock. The guardian slowly slid his sword down the large one. The evil man had noticed and waited for him to do his tactic. The guardian got to the end and quickly brought his blade to attack the evil one’s right side, whom easily blocked it. The evil man chuckled at the guardian.
“You’re clever, but that won’t be enough to stop me from receiving what I have been searching for, for centuries.” The guardian’s eyes widened in awe.
“Centuries? Then you must be the supervisor of the wicked wizard Gannondorf, you’re Kaiser!”
“Indeed,” Kaiser replied, “now allow me to have my power and I’ll be sure to let you live, I’d rather not get my blade stained in such pitiful blood.”
“No, it’s my duty now to guard the graves and that is what I shall do until I die.” The guardian said back.
“Then, be gone with you.” Kaiser picked him up and threw him into the dark wall.
Kaiser was satisfied with that and walked to the end of the corridor and held up his right hand to the end. The wall changed slightly and more of the Hyrulian ancient language appeared.
“I, the owner of the Triforce piece of power say to thee. Give me the power of darkness, give me the Dark Force!” A mark appeared on Kaiser’s right hand, the Triforce barely appeared but the top piece glowed, and then slowly dimmed. “What?!” Kaiser exclaimed. “The Triforce of Power! How? Unless.” He turned quickly to the guardian. His hand was glowing in the same way as Kaiser’s was. The guardian stood up quickly and looked at his hand, his eyes widened to see such a thing.
“What is the Triforce doing on my hand, I such a simple man chosen by the Triforce; that’s unheard of.” He said to himself.
“You must be Velken then.” Kaiser said to him with a slight frown. The guardian looked up recognizing his name.
“Yes, I am he.” Velken said back. Kaiser stood up straight at him with a bigger frown.
“So be it. As you know I was once Gannondorf’s supervisor, but it seems now, my new friend, I am yours now.”
“What? Why?” Velken said confused.
“You, Velken, I see are unaware that you, are the heir of Gannondorf. You are the man to take up his throne.”
“How can that be? I am of Hyrulian blood, he is of gurudoe blood!” Velken exclaimed back.
“Pay attention to what is happening before you!” Kaiser yelled at him. “Look at your hand, see your future. It dose matter of the blood that run through your veins, but of what the Triforce has chosen! It’s clear from you vacant expression that you don’t understand, I know.” Kaiser walked up to the man and put a hand on his shoulder and smiled evilly down to him.
“Now that you have your destiny before you, show to destiny that it has not seen. Blow away the clouds of fate and open that gate.” Kaiser pointed to the markings on the wall. “Hold up your power to it and let me receive the Dark Force so that we are of equal power.” Velken shook his head to Kaiser.
“No, I won’t help someone like you. I’d be better dead.”
“No, prepare for a chance of a lifetime. I know it sounds uncanny but you’ll be rewarded. We, together, shall rule this kingdom. The king of disputed, seen for the wonder you are! Listen to me and open the door to your own fate!” Velken looked down at the ground and thought about what Kaiser said.
“Well, I always wanted to have a kingdom of my own.” Velken smiled realizing the potential of his actions. “Ok, I’ll do it.” He walked up to the wall and held his hand. The Triforce glowed and shot a ray of light into the wall. Silence, then the wall slowly began to rise and open into a chapel like area. Kaiser smiled seeing a purple upside down triangle sitting on a stand. Kaiser walked to it slowly with Velken behind him. Kaiser reached for it and a purple flashed engulfing the corridors of the kings


Edited by Blazen on May 11, 2006 at 21:06:47.