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This is a b-day comic I made for another friend of mine.
To be honest I think the last one was better than this one being I just slapped this one together.
Credits: Sprites inc, The spriters Resource, Roxas
Edited by DreamSword on July 8, 2006 at 0:29:36.
There are two major problems with this comic:
- The white font on a yellow background is unreadable. The idea of various colors for the characters is nice, but it could use some work.
- You definitely need borders to put your panels apart. At first, I didn't even notice that there were two panels by row.
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The doc's right, my eyes burn trying to read that white font on bright yellow background. I dunno why Shadow would care so much that Cloud got pwned, though.
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There I edited it, now hopefully it'll be easier to read.
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