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QuoteYes, people. This idiotic, short story I\'ve made has irony, even I find that is pathetic. but tell me people, what is/are the irony of this short story?:
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Once upon a time, a young lad, named Trevor, and his sister, named Jeri, were playing one of Trevor\'s videogames. Jeri was bored of the games, and she really wanted to play something else with Trevor, so she asked him to play dolls with her. Trevor was not happy at all with the idea, \"What? No way! Only girls play with dolls!\" Jeri was furious at Trevor, and thought of an idea, \"Trevor, I\'ll make you a bet. Whoever, one of us, puts something in their mouth first, then they lose! If I win, you\'ll have to play dolls with me, and give me a piggy-back ride until supper time!\" Trevor replied, while putting a piece of gum into his mouth, \"And if I win, then I get the dog *chew* to lick your face!\" Jeri had the time of her life, while Trevor had to give her a piggy-back ride, and played with dolls, until supper time, when they both made another bet on the dinner table, \"Hey, Trevor, let\'s have another bet! Let\'s see who gets off their chair first. If you get up first, I win, and you have to be my slave.\" Trevor laughed away, \"And if I win, then you\'ll have to turn the garden frog, into a handsome prince!\" Trevor\'s mother asked him to clean up the table, and wash the dishes. He got off his chair and cleaned the table and dishes. Trevor cleaned up Jeri\'s room, as she rode on his back, \"Make haste, you worthless slave!\"
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Yes, see! If you found the ironies, (which were too simple to find) then you see that they are very idiotic and needed more thought.
To tell you the truth, this was a true story. This actually happend to \"Trevor\", and he decided to type it up right here on the Doc\'s message board.
Well, whatever with that crud. So yeah, what is the irony of this short story?
[Edited on 3-1-2003 by Ultimate X]
