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You\'ve been looking at my avatar for too long.

Oh, sorry. I took it literally. \'Stale as f**k\'. Most of that suff is...alright as peoms go. If you\'re into nice little kiddies\' fariy tale thingies, you will hate it. BTW, you everthought of being a professional poet? You can make a lot of money with the books you sell! And it would more than pay for the needs of, say, a wife and a family?;)

I can just see it now \"Poems of darkness\".

I\'m going slightly mad! I\'m writing a poem of *not telling* and I say in the middle stuff of frozen sheem and mouldy cheese!!!!:eek:

[Edited on 26-10-2003 by AirMan]

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Did that \'cleaning stuff\' give you a headache, by any chance?

Thanks! BTW, what you said about me being weired is right. How many sain people to you know write a seriouse poem and in the middle, imclude frozen sheep and mouldy cheese? Oh, well, at least I\'m happey! Ewww! Icky Icky goo! Wow! I only have to say something that rhymes and I think of a poem! Ridiculouse!

I\'m not sure if I should post it. It\'s stupid. It wasn\'t even worth writing! Oh, well, here goes!

Icky-icky goo

Ewww!
Icky-icky goo!
You only need to stand in it
For just a little bit
And you are almost dead!
No, not red!!
Sheep sheep seep!
Beep beep beep!
Eewww!
Icky-icky goo!
by a not very proud, nor impressed AirMan.

I think I\'ve been standing on that icky-icky goo for too long. It\'s gone to my head.

I\'ll redeam myself by trying something a little different! Enjoy!

There is someone looking at me
I don’t know why or who they be
I think it might be scaring me
I don’t know why or who they be
But there\'s someone looking at me.

Creepy. I thought I\'d try something different, for this. It\'s almost like a mirrored cillaquen (sp?).:lol:

Another, somewhat weired, one which came from neither knowledge, nor experieance...in fact, where did it come from!?

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I do not know what this thing is
But it grabs me from behind.
I am not sure what its power is
But it’s more than I can find.

I venture into my house
I feel its presence there
If only it was but a louse
With not quite as much hair

It troubles me deep inside
It kills me from within.
There is nowhere I can hide
It is my greatest sin.

I am hit with the flying glass
Of a friend being killed.
They said “She’s out of your class”
But her heart, I could have filled.

This torturous monster, she also had.
Teasing at her side
Although nothing seemed to make her sad
She resorted to suicide.

For every person that wants to live
Many want to die
Although I can never see
Quite the reason why.

I never see this nagging monster
I just sense he’s there
I s’pose that’s what happened with her
That drove her to you-know-where.

I know not of what to do next
I need guidance from above
This thing’s a real pain in the neck
I wish it were a dove!

A dove you can tame
A dove you can control
A dove you can train
But not so easily a troll.

A troll is a bully
A troll causes pain
A troll is always fully
Bent on filling the drain.

[Edited on 31-10-2003 by AirMan]

Aerosith-ish dude induce thought.. >.>

Look at me beneath the blood and flesh.
Look inside me, What is hidden by my DNA?
See the real me? Do you see light, or clouds
Do you see total darkness perhaps?
Is what you see the truth or a deception?
An illusion a lie, false truths perhaps?
Will you ever truly see the real me?

Hey Rind! You\'re pretty good! On the other hand, it kinda made a shiver go up my spine...

Weired...again! I ought to stop! They\'re so weired!

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Many I know love this life
I know they cannot change
Many I know who hate this life
And are tied up in chains

They do not think of hiding
They do not think of death
They do not think of anything
Other than their breath.

Do they know what’s going on
Under their very nose?
A war is starting, terrible
And no-one will ever know.

Many I know hate this life
And are tied up in chains.
Many I know love this life
And know they’ll never change.

They like the birds and bees
And the green, green grass.
They like the swaying of the trees
But it’s as fragile as glass.

They will not see it coming.
The darkness from within.
And the soft whisper of the devil
Sinning an awful sin.

I can see it coming
The darkness from within.
I know the war is starting
And the awful sin.

I can but sit and watch
There’s nothing I can do.
I can do nothing
Against this awful sin.

Frustrating, it is.
Annoying, it be
Horrifying, it is
But I cannot stop destiny.

I wish I couldn’t see things
If nothing I can do.
There is no point in seeing things
If nothing I must do.

I feel like a sinner
The devil’s right hand man
Like I mustn’t eat dinner!
Like living is a ban.

[Edited on 2-11-2003 by AirMan]

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Did what?

Well I\'m sorry for bumping up an old topic but here\'s mine...
My world is full of anger an hatred
I cannot live in peace
I am ordered by everyone
No thank you\'s or what-so-ever for when I am done
Why is it like this?
Why am I the one stuck in this abyss?
My anger and hatred swirl round and round
As happiness for me cannot be found
My rage will soon comsume me
I, even one day might try to kill my family
For they are the source of my sorrow
As they continue to satisfy themselves
While I am left alone and forgotten
Thus, giving me a river of broken emotions
My trust within them is breaking
Soon I will put them in their place
As I shall take my vengence
Then leave without a trace...
I shall forgive them for now
But if they continue not to treat me well
I shall give them hell

It\'s not how I really feel. Just how I felt today.I forgive my parents now though. Yeah it did seem psychotic... LOL

Well I\'m glad you like it. Yeah they do seem pretty scary. LOL

Am I on your list of people to kill?

Eep. Those are som scary thoguhts you have. LOL I want to make a poem...

Lucky for me then. Whew! I don\'t wanna end up dead...Jet-Li man, put away that Katana blade.

I make haikus!:D Here are some:

-Orbit
Whole universe is
Always spinning around, but
We are not dizzy?

-Life
Life goes on
You dwell in the great
endless chain.

-Harbor
Drifting silently
The boat docks in the clear bay
It journey ended.

-Mind
Growing as you do
It is an invaluable
Ally for your life.

I thought them up in English class.

Vincent\'s remind me of Kenshin. Everything reminds me of Kenshin!

My mind is about to explode. Too...much literature....too....much...thinking!!!:eek:

[Edited on 12-11-2003 by AimMan v2.5]

I get entered in a poem contest every year and ufortunatally I lose.:cry:
Here\'s one of my poems.
The Video
By Cody

It was evident I didn\'t appreciate,
my friends tape about an invisible ape.
I said,\"A visible ape would be more amusing.\" To me the video seemed very confusing.:)
Like it?:cool:

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Was that Edgar Allen Poe? It reminded me of stuff he did.

I believe I saw a video with an invisible ape. I thought he was pretty CLEAR!:lol:

Oops. No more jokes.:(

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Hmm...I\'m noticing a reacurring topic of bread.(j/k)
I like your poems though. They truly look at life and show that life is made up of more than just possesions, but of thoughts and feelings.

\"One defence and one attack.Both beyblades can break your back!But teamed up together,makes the battle better!\" Oo

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So this should really be

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No you don\'t. Hmmm...yes, allitteration (sp?) is always a good touch to strengthen the mood. I want to use it more.

At least he\'s not speaking in Oxymoron.

Dunno what\'s an oxymoron?

Example: Lamentable comedy.

Putting two opposites together. Sometimes they make poems sound good. SOMETIMES.

Here\'s a poem I wrote when I got mad at someone and I was bored.

Old English key:
Thee: You
Thine: Your, yours
Thou: You
Taketh: Take (duh!)

One day a man said \"I\'m kind\"
Bah, I thought, how untrue
Thou twist my words
To fit thine needs
Thou taketh my truths
Toform tine evil lies
Kind, I see, is an antonym
To what truly describes thee

this goes out to all of your drunk drivers....

DRIVE DRIVE DRIVE
FAST FAST FAST
CRASH CRASH CRASH
DIE!:)

i hope that message is getting out to you people...... get a designated driver people......

~Your daily public sevice anouncment ...............by Gutter mouth