GRUDGE! Rate this from a 1-4, the higher the better it was, rate me in spriting (the use, the placement ect.),creativity and over all, thank you!!! ^^

[Edited on 5-9-2003 by ELBURITO]

sprite:3.5
You would get a 4 but the background dosn\'t match the sprites very well. But you did put them in the rite place...Just need a diffrent background.

creativity: 2.5
Well its good...Funnyness aint great...And I dont no why mario kicked luigi!?

overal: 3
Its good not one of your best though Elburtio...So just work on them a bit more Im judjing that took you 10-15 mins...Take a bit more time.

-serge (!_!)

err I couldn\'t find mario backrounds, sorry,he kicked luigi in the balls, he was holding his ears because he didnt wan\'t to listen to luigi ^^ It took me 30 minutes cuz I tried to get some SPIKAL AFFEKTS in with photoshop, well it can\'t be trusted anymore^^. Any way, I really needed some critizism, I won\'t learn if everyone is all I LUV U ELBURITO!!! U R SO KOOL!!! LOL!!! No, thats not good, critizism is how I REALLY learn, i.e. I have really decent grammer now^^.

sprits: 2
I noticed there was two different sprites of Luigi, and it was the best sprite out of all of them.....grafical (sorry about the spelling) wise. I like how you used luigi pulling a raddish or whatever from the ground as him holding his balls.........and the sprites where ok as it waspretty much all the same (exept the other one of luigi).....over all........two for sprites

placement: 3
they didn\'t stand on nothing, like a wall, floting.you know........very good......3 for placment
creativity: 1.5
Ok, it was only a sample so the whole Kicking-in-the-nuts thing is exeplable. Background......was pretty mush a cut and past image so....less creative...........
I liked the story because it envolved a childhood hero......with humor of what I enjoy now..........over all 1.5 for creativity

Over all: 2.5
I noted the little ditails....like you never had mario satnding like a centimeter higher then luigi because we ALL know they can FLY...that was a joke because alot of poeple do that........and that you shunk mario sprite when entering the doorto the c-train thing.....and you didn\'t just have mario dissapeer out of no where like ALOT of poeple do...........
very good job and most of it but over all 2.5 for over all

I know, my photoshop wan\'t quite working,neither was my gif consturuction kit pro, so I was forced to make a comic, my internet wasn\'t working however also, so I was forced to work with the sprite collection folder of mine. thank you, and yes, I\'m better at \"drawing\"not \"arranging\", no I don\'t like ms paint, and yes, It is one of my less good ones.

I think the placement was perfect, it made it look realistic....
Spriting: 4/5
When Luigi was kicked, you changed the sprite style...and he changed colors a bit.
Sound: Why did I type this?
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Placement: 5/5
Better than most people\'s comics...
Overall: 4.5/5
Not perfect, but not bad. It\'s better than a few others I\'ve seen...