Hi!

I\'ve started doing a bunch of comics. Thery\'re not as good as a lot of yours, I know, but please don\'t be too hard on me!:lol:

I\'ve done only chapter 1, so far, but there will be more. This is but the begginning (time to say \'oh dear\').

Chapter 1: The taming of ProtoMan.

http://img8.photobucket.com/albums/v28/AirMan/Comic1/newcomic1.jpg

http://img8.photobucket.com/albums/v28/AirMan/Comic1/newcomic2.jpg

http://img8.photobucket.com/albums/v28/AirMan/Comic1/newcomic3.jpg

http://img8.photobucket.com/albums/v28/AirMan/Comic1/newcomic4.jpg

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http://img8.photobucket.com/albums/v28/AirMan/Comic1/newcomic7.jpg

http://img8.photobucket.com/albums/v28/AirMan/Comic1/newcomic8.jpg

[Edited on 23-1-2004 by AirMan]

Good job! Keep it up

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Not bad at all. Did you get the title of the chapter from \"The Taming of the Shrew?\"

Interesting plot. But I must say your comics need work. One shot comics really only work with those with no real plot(one shot means one panel per image). You saved in the forbiddin .jpg format. Not a good thing. Save in .gif(not in MSPaint though) or .png. And sometimes the sprites will look a bit off and the text can make no sense. On a one to ten rating, I give it a two.

On another note, be aware that it\'s better if people tell you what you can do to improve than have people keep saying they\'re good.

I know. I\'ll bear that in mind. I\'m glad you told me that. I will work to improve it. (Besides, I wouldn\'t discard your opinion! Your own comics are extraordinary! So you\'re a big help!)

Problems: Speech bubbles and size.
The speech bubbles look like shite, and theres really just two comics there broken up.

Plot wise it looks good to expand into a more complex one.

..heh That\'s cool airman, keep it up!!