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I\'ve had trouble with some a couple of sprites lately. It\'s the head of one of my characters. I\'ve spent hours working on it, but it still doen\'t look right! Can anyone help me? Here\'s the sprites (2 on far right) and other ones for reference (all the others):
http://img7.photobucket.com/albums/v18/BladeManEXE/SonicEXE_Stand.bmp
If anyone can edit them or just give advice, it would be highly appreciated.

[Edited on 8-3-2004 by BladeMan.EXE]


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Hmm... the isometric ones seem alright to me, but the ones facing left, right, forward, and backwards seem ackward.

To me, on the ones facing left and right, I think the fins are comming out too long. You might want to shorten them. On the forwards and backwards one though, I\'m not sure what to say excapt it looks too much like an x. You could try looking at the anime screen shots of bass looking forward I guess and try to imitate those fins that way. :P

[Edited on 3/8/2004 by ProtoStar]

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Yeah, what he said, the isometric ones are good, but to show some more shading and depth, use more contras in the blue and red. The left and righ tones, I odn\'t know how to fix, but you will get them soon enough.

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You called?

http://img19.photobucket.com/albums/v56/SnakemanEXE/Edit.bmp

hehe, as you can see I had 5 minutes to spare. Acoording to the other posts the other headpeaces needed editing too, so i fixed \'em up a bit. Since the model character was Bass I modeld the head after him, I know it is sort of a sonic fusion, but I just like Basses head better.

I can see you had some problems with perspective allright so I fixed that too. Its not much of a change but It might work.

You can edit it however you want, take it more as a suggestion. Enjoy.


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Originally posted by Snakeman.EXE
You called?

http://img19.photobucket.com/albums/v56/SnakemanEXE/Edit.bmp

hehe, as you can see I had 5 minutes to spare. Acoording to the other posts the other headpeaces needed editing too, so i fixed \'em up a bit. Since the model character was Bass I modeld the head after him, I know it is sort of a sonic fusion, but I just like Basses head better.

I can see you had some problems with perspective allright so I fixed that too. Its not much of a change but It might work.

You can edit it however you want, take it more as a suggestion. Enjoy.

You did good snakeman!


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