okay, i have a freewebs site cuz im POOR. but hey if you want to take a look at my cruddy web comic then feel free to visit. my site is under construction and if you would like to help please e-mail me at megamancomics15@yahoo.com

http://www.freewebs.com/megamancomis15/index.htm

PS: I forgot to mention that there are typos. sry. Also, feel free to post your coments here.

[Edited on 23-8-2004 by metralman]

Cool!What Program did you use?I like how you got those Pics of them up 10/10!

thanks for the very positive comment. i used regular paint. thats it. its still not that great. but im still looking for photoshop.

Ps: Im also accepting story suggestions.

it looks so-so it could use some work... and spend more time on specail effects and try to shade them.

And try to use backrounds like in my comic at my site

I have a stupid story but I\'ll post it any way


Story
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Megaman finds a mysteriouse crystal he brings it back to Doctor light,He asks what to do with it Doctor light says I may be able to use it,He puts it in A Transmiter and it opens A Gate Making Every Megaman ever made Classic-BN-Zero-X-Legends,They also summoned the Basses of that time to and all the enemies,Now it\'s all the megaman\'s Job to stop the Basses and the others from destroying the world


P.S.You could do Protoman\' Roll\'s and Gut\'sman as well

Like axlgs said, you need some official backgrounds. It\'s not the worst I\'ve seen, oh no. But it\'s not the best either. Just keep working and you\'ll improve.

hey wind, good idea, but I already have a little back ground story for my qraphics problem. I want to use other megaman sprites and bosses so i called the qraphic changes \"graphic dementions\" you\'ll see in about a week the second chapter.
Battle to the Death

Cool!
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um windman you just spamed!... well i hope you get some backrounds ... here i\'ll geive you a link to a site that has various megaman backrounds in 16-bit

link:
http://www.bghq.com/
hope the comic improves ... oh and make an archive for your chapters on your site

This is a terrible comic, period. The backgrounds are gritty, the spelling is awful and the characters are badly pasted in.
You have text boxes but no signs of the characters actually speaking, does this mean they are psychic? I also couldn\'t tell if this was an action comic or a funny comic. It looks like action with the fighting but I also chuckled a few times at how sloppy alot of the scenes looked.
Sorry kid for being harsh but this just looks like another comic that is horribly below par, in fact it sits with that Tails90 comic that Shard uses as \"An example of a Bad Sprite Comic.\" Mind you I am giving you bonus points for not having the author character in there or the fact there are no BnG jokes in there, but otherwise this comic blows.

3/10

EDIT:

Man don\'t be harsh! If it\'s his first comic then it\'s good! My first one was way worse than his. You\'ve seen it it sucked!

And if the guy likes Protoman then he should be able to put that in his comics. i hate Bubblman, so I do ones of him being cut up!

Anyway go here for some good backgrounds.

Err Axl, Sprites Inc does have quite a few backgrounds. I found at least ten for MMBN4.

And Metral, I do agree. Don\'t make Protoman the centre of attention

Oh so you were being fairly nice? Fair enough. But instead of just moaning, give advice like Flareman did.

yeah i ment the classic megaman backrounds

Yeah, harsh and harsher.
By the way where IS Metralman? It\'s been me you and Jigoku arguing, he hasn\'t posted anything new.

yewah you\'[re right WHERE IS METRALMAN?:eek:

CLICK HERE TO GO TO ALL THE BG\'S YOU\'LL EVER NEED
oops, capslock was on.

the background central

(if the link don\'t work)
http://androcity.com/backgrounds.php

hey guys, thanks for the compliments *cough*sarcasim*cough* im alive. Its just that my computer is kinda broken at the moment (i guess it died from my crapy comics lol) so i dont know what\'s gonna happen. oh well, if i ever get a chance again, I\'ll try harder. i WAS working on a 2nd chapter...oh well...

It looks like you don\'t put much work into your comics.The sometimes bad/misplaced effects,the random pixels hanging around the charecteds,no lining to text boxes,etc,etc.....
Maybe if you put more effort into your comics,they should improve.

This is your first sprite comic right?
It\'s ok but....
I\'m sorry if my comments sound harsh.
You\'re speech bubbles need more work, it looks like they\'re a bit small for the text so resize them a little.
If you notice in the first frame a protion of Protomans shield is missing and you forgot to color in the space in the letter P in the third frame, as well as many of the other special effects.
Aslo notice that in the part of the comic at doctor wilies lab you have portions of the background missing, so you recorled them, that\'s a no-no in spriting. when you are cutting images in paint select the second yeelow box in the toolbar area, it will allow you to move the sprite without interfering with the backgrounds.
However, overall since this is your first comic I\'d give it a
6/10
The effect you used are very nice btw.