well no offense saiyaman but
1.the bitages are different the sprites just don\'t go together well
2.there was no true beginning or storyline it just started off in a fight
3.it\'s hard to read whats in the bubbles since the boxes are transparent
4.it made barely any sense to me and what happened in between the two comics?there hp just dropped by about 300 each
overall:
sorry but this needs a LOT of work change the sprites you use maintain it to one type of bittage work on the text squares or bubbles or whatever you were using anyway i hope your next comic turns out better