Topic: Kirby Comic Episode 2 - Interordi Forums

Dark Assasion Zero
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After many days (and month) to get my lazy butt to get this comic done I finally finished. I\'m starting to improve slowly but surely (as much as I can on paint)

If you missed it here is page 1

http://img49.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img49&image=Kibycomic.jpg

Page 2 *NEW*

http://img99.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img99&image=sk2.gif

Please tell me what you think and ways to improve it.

[Edited on 21-11-2004 by Dark Assasion Zero]

I am the Dark Assasion you are my next target.BWAHAHAHA!!!!

I shall destroy the puny mortals!

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ProtoMan.E.X.E
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I thought they were funny I liked them

I crazy. :rofl:

BladeMan.EXE
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I think they could use a little work in the effects department. Other than that, not too bad. Just keep improving and you\'ll get it right.

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Dark Assasion Zero
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Well im doing the best I can do with a normal paint program. As usaul im trying to improve it.

I am the Dark Assasion you are my next target.BWAHAHAHA!!!!

I shall destroy the puny mortals!

One of my favorite sites.
http://www.homestarrunner.com/

Proto
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You did that with just the Paint Program:eek: Wow they are good for that program find a better one and I am sure the effects will look better.

Black Dranzer.exe
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Good work *claps* 9 out of 10

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deltafist
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Hmm, I\'d say it\'s good. 7/10

Your such a chicken! Go battle that baby Mettaur!

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Mega X.exe
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The effects do need work, but you\'ll get better with practice.

My advice to you: If a joke ever seems forced at all, DON\'T USE IT! It\'s gotta come naturally.

Black Dranzer.exe
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Quote:
Originally posted by Mega X.exe
The effects do need work, but you\'ll get better with practice.

My advice to you: If a joke ever seems forced at all, DON\'T USE IT! It\'s gotta come naturally.

itrue but still it may be forced but its still dam funny.

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Shaft
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I could do better.I would show you one of mine but I don\'t know how to put imiges in a post or sig and I don\'t know how to link them.5/10

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