C\'mon people make up some characters quick backround, good or evil hey and if you want to make it something like you. Make it up and have fun!

[Edited on 16-11-2005 by bass9002]

ummmmmmm...........how?:conf:

Umm something like this:
He went by the name of shimmer or that\'s what the press refered him as. Course like any other hero this was not his only life. 15 years old and he had already saved dozens of people. Using his ability of bending glass he had subdued countless criminals. He was roughly 1.8 meters had deep green eyes and every where he went he caried a bag full of glass. It seemed to the standard onlooker that whenever he needed a weapon or a small item he could reach into the pouch and withdraw the exact item he needed.

Something like that Masterman.EXE

o cool

[Edited on 13-11-2005 by Masterman.EXE]

All right I\'m gonna try again:

He awoke and took his surroundings into account. He appeared to be chained to a medical bed. The door said CONTAINMENT LAB. The man was now throughly confused the last thing he remembered was that he was in Russia and had just found a uranium facility with a comrade. Then it began to get blurry but he did remember that there had been a big explosion.

He tried to sit up and found the chain was very weak because it snapped so easily. Quickly he went to the door and found that it was unlocked.
\"Why do we have to watch this guy, I mean he\'s probably never gunna wake up,\" said a security guard to his comrade.
\"I dunno they say he\'s dangerous,\"said the other.
\"Um could you tell me where I am?\" said the man.
\"WHAT! HE\"S AWAKE SHOOT HIM!\" screamed the guard.
Now truely scared the man took the chain still slightly attatched to him and ferociously whacked the guard.
\"Y-you k-killed him!\"said the other guard who raised his gun and fired a shot at the man. The man felt a sharp sting as the bullet passed through his side. The man took his chain and in order to protect himself struck towards the gun and nocked it out of the guard\'s hand. Now feeling an insepressible evil in him he lashed out at the fleeing guard\'s leg. This tripped the man and put him on his stomach. The man nelt on the guard\'s back and began to strangle the guard with the chain and killed the guard.

The man later to be nicknamed by the press: \"Chain\" because that was his murder weapon became an almost invinceble criminal killed hundreds of people because they just didn\'t under stand him.

And so endeth the prologue of Chain.

[quote]Originally posted by Masterman.EXE
o cool

[Edited on 13-11-2005 by Masterman.EXE] [/quote]



My Superhero would be someone who could turn invisable.
Who wouldn\'t want to dissapear at command?

YOUR GETTING OFF TOPIC ELBURITO!!!!!
p.s your post was spam

Then what is your post supposed to be? :rolleyes:

Well, \'RITO, I can say, such people already exist. I don\'t know them, but I can do that as well, but it aint on command. Really annoying, mind you.

Well, lessee...

I\'d call them: The Yin-Yang Twins!

The one is on the extreme on the one end, the other on the other end. One has powers of light and water and such, the other of darkness and fire and stuff. One\'s male, other female.

Rest soon to follow.

ok my post might have unessary, but i think your Yin-Yang Twins thing is a cool idea.

[Edited on 15-11-2005 by django]

Yin-Yang twin powers....activate!

Form of......inner peace!

Nice Juno!thats what I\'m looking for that was awsome!;)

All right I\'m gunna try again:

Her name was Taberah. She always felt lonely because so many people had betrayed her so many times she felt she could trust no one. Being born in the streets was a hard life especially for a girl. From age 3 she new how to steal expertly and she had never been cought yet. An expert as a mechanic she using scraps of metal had began a project. Although she never went to school she was suprisingly smart. Taberah had barely known her mother and had never seen her father. However one day things changed. An old hag had come up to her and had croaked, \"You are the one who will change everything!\" and then gave Taberah a small jewel and left. Taberah never saw that woman again but the jewel seemed to have a small little emblem and some words on it. She didn\'t know how to read however the emblem seemed to be a small thing of fire.

Later as Taberah was inspecting the jewel a gang named the the black widows aproached her. She quickly hid the jewel in her mouth. The gang passed but when they did the jewel began to burn like fire in her mouth. As soon as the widows were gone she spat it out and noticed that it was on fire! However it quickly turned back into a jewel.

This strange thing happened again later when a boy no older than her passed by. He had just saved a small girl from the police for stealing a melon from a stall. When he passed he smiled at her and she blushed.

The letters on the jewel were now driving Taberah crazy. So she found an old street rat that knew how to read.
\"Unite this jewel with its twin for either dark or light fire\" Thats what the old man had said it said. Then it struck her when that evil head of the black widows had passed the jewel had wanted to combine with his. And when that kind boy had passed the jewel had also wanted to combine. Now she had a choice, combining with the gang member would give her the power to avenge on the city and all that had been cruel to her or she could get the power to save people from what had happened to her......


To be continued......

I like how you did this \"story\" better than your first one but dont git me wrong but the first one was still good

(Nice to know that they have CITY OF HEROES for this kind of thing now.)

Ah, well.

Behold...Jack Hellman!

Jack Hellman
Teh SuperVillain (Yes A Villain. Deal With It.)
Jack was your average, ordinary inventor with waaaay too much time on his hands. He was working on a potion which could make you a perfect being. He relied on his little assistant, Bob Bobbington, to supply him with what he needed. But, Bob was cut back on several years\' pay and he wanted revenge...

\"It\'s done!\" cried Jack, and swallowed the whole beaker. Nothing happened. So he swallowed a couple more beakers\' full of the potion, and all of the sudden Jack fainted!

When he came to, he found that he had lost his nose, and his ears. His skin turned a pale blue, and his hair turned black and was combed back. He grew horrific fangs and claws. He quickly realized that he had turned into a vampire. Bob was the first to see Jack this way.

\"Ha ha ha ha ha! Sucker! I switched some of the ingredients for your potion, and now-- you\'re freaking ugly!\"

Jack\'s red eyes began to glow, along with his anger...

Nothing was heard from next door, except some slashing, splattering, and Bob screaming.

Jack quietly walked out of the laboratory, and put on his- or should I say Bob\'s- new brown (and slightly red) trenchcoat. He wore black pants and black work boots, and Jack quietly flew off, waiting to seek revenge on the world for what he had become...

Powers:
Claws
Super Reflexes
Flight (Obviously)
Teleportation

Yay! I always wanted to get that out...

[Edited on 16-11-2005 by rockmaniskool]

hay good idea rock maybe this could be also about villains

I did say good or bad.

You know what? Screw that other story of the Yin-Yang Twins! This is a way better version!

\'Heroe/Heroine\' (that\'s how it\'s spelled right? Or is that the drug?) Name: Yin
Cover Name: Felice
Age: 16
Height: 5\"10\'
Weight: Erm... 125 pounds?
Profile: Tomboy. Sporty type. Popular type of girl.

Heroe Name: Yang
Cover Name: Regus
Age: 16
Height: 6\"1\'
Weight: 135 pounds.
Profile: The reader. The scientist. The smart guy. The guy who wears glasses and thereby is often called a nerd. So instead, he wears shades in his Heroe \'form\'.


The beginning:

The scene was in a laboratory. The only light was that of the few lamps in the room. There stood a few tables with all sorts of chemical stuff on it. You could see two capsules in the middle of the next room with a human in each one of them. A few people in white coats walked around.

\"Dr. Antler, are you ready?\"

\"Whenever you are, Dr. Kaze.\"

\"Then pull that switch to put in our specially made fluids in those capsules.\"

Dr. Kaze pulled a large switch, and the colours within the capsules changed as fluids started pumping into them.

\"Now close the lead doors and turn on the radio-active ray generators.\"

\"Will that be safe sir?\" Asked one of the assistents.

\"It will be for us.\"

The doors closed, and within the room with the capsules some hidden cannon-like machenerie appeared and they released their invisible radio-active rays onto the capsules.
Back in the first room, the scientists watched as they saw something happening, transforming, within both capsules.

\"After all those years experimenting,\" Dr. Antler spoke. \"and trying to actually, scientifically create human beings, not through cloning, but simply by putting in genetic data into computers and using the right \'ingredients\' for human DNA... we finally accomplished creating these two magnificent creatures. And now the moment is there, that we alter their DNA, so that they won\'t just be humans. No. They will be like true children of GOD! And we, my friends, we are their parents. We are God Himself!\"

\"Sir!\" One of the assistents yelled. \"Sir! The generators are over-heating! It\'s gonna blow!\"

\"What?!\" Hissed Dr. Kaze. \"We gotta get out of here!\"

\"It\'s no use! Once they explode, we\'ll have a nuclear explosion that could whipe out a small country with ease!\"

\"Then cool down the generators!\" Antler yelled. \"Turn them off immediatly!\"

\"Impossible sir.\"

The eyes of each and every single person in the room were widened and filled with fear. People clung to eachother, made their last wishes, before the explosion would come.
A large red \"20\" came over the computer screen, indicating they had that many seconds left.

\"I\'m sorry, Kate.\" Antler said to Kaze, whilst he had his arm around her. \"This was not meant to happen.\"

\"This is not your fault, Charles.\" Kate Kaze spoke to him. \"We could not have foreseen this.\"

\"Still... I feel sorry. I love you Kate...\"

Kate looked at Charles face with surprise and tears in her eyes. Then... death embraced her as the generators could not take more and exploded...


...


It was dark. It was cold. It could just slightly move in the think fluids that surrounded the creature. Were am I? Slowly, a pair of eyes opened. It was the male of the pair. He had awakened just now. He lay on the ground in thick, multi-coloured fluids. He was naked. As he took in his surroundings, he noticed his female sibling. She didn\'t wear anything as well, but that seemed normal to him. His memory was empty. He only knew he existed here and now. That was it. He saw that the girl now awakened as well.

\"Are you alright?\" He asked her, then it occurred to him he was able to speak.

\"Ungh... yeah...\" She said. She was covered with a thin layer of the multi-coloured, mostly yellow-green, thick glowing fluids.

\"Where are we?\" The female asked.

\"I have not a single clue.\" Was her companion\'s answer.

They started walking. Away from the where they first had gazed into the world.

...

\"Are we there yet?\" The boy asked his mother.

\"No.\" She answered.

\"Are we there yet?\"

\"Not yet.\"

\"Are we there yet?\"

\"Would you please stop now?\" The woman said with a bit of annoyance, but laughing as well.

\"...aaaaaaaaarrreee weeeeee theeeeeerrreee yeeeeeet???\"

BAM!!

Something hit the car. The woman quickly smashed the brake and the car stopped in the middle of the Highway.

\"What was THAT?!\" The boy asked his mother in fright.

\"I don\'t know.\" She stepped out of the car and ran to the place they had been hit, soon to be followed by her son.

\"They\'re people!\" He exclaimed. \"And they\'re naked!\"

\"Quickly Timothy, call an ambulance!\" The mother told her teenage son.


...


The docters had finished their analasis.

\"This is really weird.\" One of them said. \"They\'re still alive and practically unharmed after having the full impact of a car driving at 80 mph.\"

\"Not only that.\" His colleague said. \"But they were also covered with a substance we\'ve never seen before here on earth.\"

\"Are you suggesting they are aliens?\"

\"Maybe.\"

\"No. I don\'t believe that. After they wake up, we just give them some clothes, have them call their families and make them go home.\"

And so it happened. The female just pushed some buttons on the phone they gave her, and told the person on the other side to pick her up at the hospital, just as the docter told her to do. The two of them left with somebody they had never met before. His name was Vincent T. Minnigan. And he used to be known as... (you may guess)


Damn, I like this! Even how unoriginal this is, I like it!

[Edited on 17-11-2005 by Morphman]

I\'ll right Taberah part two:
She was faced with a dificult choice, for days she pondered it and finally came to the conclusion: she would just take both and create something ultimate.

First she went to the boy, and she was talking but while she was talking she noticed that his back pocket was bright. So she tripped on purpose, and when he reached to help her she grabbed his hand and his waist elegantly taking the jewel.

The black widow was harder, she noticed that his was on his ear as an earing. She had no idea how to do this. Then she came up with a plan that with a bit of luck she could pull off. Quickly she pretended to slip and her arm flailed wacking his ear, the earing flew off. She said she was sorry and that she said she saw the earing over to his left when in fact it was to the right. As he was looking she grabbed it and ran off.

Taberah found an empty building that she entered. Very carefully she put all three on her palm and watched them fuse. The new fusion flew towards her and entered he body. All of a sudden part of it exited her body and created a clone of her . This clone shot a crimson flame out of her palm striking the real Taberh, as the smoke cleared the evil clone fled.

Taberah now with the remaining light power had to defend the city from her dark clone.

NOTE:If you didn\'t know in Hebrew Taberah means fire.

man how do you come up with these great ideas

We use that incredible organ of ours that is called a brain, and combine it with the awesome powers of imagination.

i know that morphman, but like where or how does he get the idea

My hero will be WhoopeeMan, his job is to make Megaman sit on a Whoopee cushion. His ability is to fart REALLY LOUD!:rofl:

:eek::rolleyes::madgo:omg your an idiot, this is supposed to be serious!

Anyway I hope morph can finish his piece soon.

zero777 this is not to make fun of this toipc but to post good ideas not something like WhoopeeMan!:mad:

Btw why don\'t you make one?

because i dont have any thing writin down and i really bad at spelling

Huh? I was supposed to finish something? What? Where? Who? Why?
Can\'t I also just leave an open end for people to start imagining? In a while, somebody has to come and just be SO curious about it, they might even write a story on it!

But if demand is high, the finishing touch is nye. Or however the saying goes.