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Welcome to my FanFic, a thanks to the love of my life, Hoshi Hikara, for pulling me through all the hard times, and Phatman Dover for being a harsh friend when I needed it, and thanks to both of them for introducing their own characters. You might wanna stick around, as this become a provokative thriller around the middle.
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Jesus died in a time before furs appeared on earth. For this story we must make that clear. And yes, this Sonic Story takes place on Earth (A/N: My story, I can bend it to my will, silence you cannon freaks). Let's join our main character in his youth.

It was another Saturday night for young 7-year old Evan Ryoushi, a red fox. He sat playing his Super NES. His mom's sreams of pain echoed through the halls. He hated it. His father was abusive towards both of them. He rubbed his own black eye as the yelling and sounds of hits contacting continued. He grew angrier until finally he did it. Now some of you may beleive this next part involes a hand gun of some type. But no, you see Evan was a smart child. Thinking ahead even when mad. What would shooting his dad get him. A nice cold Dention Home. But the call he placed to the cops got him freedom. Got his mother freedom. But one bad thing happened. His mother slowly drifted away from him. Because of this he grew cold. But this is just the beginning of our story.

A 17-year old red fox wearing black jeans and a black shirt with Greenday's American Idiot logo on it rides down the sidewalk on a skate board. He grinds a rail up to the school he goes to and jumps off. This is our "hero". Evan drearily sit in his seat. His school was allowed to be religious, it was a small school, no one would notice. Today's topic was on Jesus. Well not exactly Jesus, more The Da Vinci Code. It was his English class and he was getting annoyed. He wasn't a religious person. He Finally raised his hand. "Yes Mr. Ryoushi?" the teacher looked surprised, as Evan rarely expressed interest in most of the books he picked. Evan cocked his eye "Jesus is a touchy subject around here. You see you're Human Mr. Gleeson, Jesus died for you... alot of us are furs... after Jesus, the 'Damned Ones' as the hate groups call us.... the one Jesus didn't die for." Everyone looked at him. The Teacher had no response. After afew seconds of silence the bell rang and Evan was the first to leave. He was alittle happy with himself. He had successfuly shut up a teacher. He had grown up hating the world. In the worst area of the city. With a cold family. But through all the dark, through all the pain, his best friend always pulled him through. He was heading to meet her when a bat girl pulled him into an empty classroom. "What the?" He received a hush. A beautiful white bat girl stood before him. "Keep it down, I have some business to discuss with you... hmmmm, even if Eggman isn't gay he has good taste in men." Evan blushed abit "Uh thanks, wait- EGGMAN!?" She shushed him again "Keep it down! I know this is weird but Eggman wants you to be in his organization, I happen to be a mercenary for him" Evan glanced at her "Then why send you to get me?" the bat chuckled "Well one because he's busy with another recruit, and two could be cause I admire a fox who can get the job done" The Bat's mind flashed to a certain famous two tailed fox she had met afew years back. "So," she began "if you join Egg-" Evan interruppted "This world is flawed, it needs... new management.... I'd be happy to join, Miss Rogue" Rogue was alittle taken back "Who do you...?" He gave a smirk "I enjoy your work in the theft department, actualy you're a heroine of mine. Now miss, I don't beleive it's impolite to keep Robotnik waiting..."

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(Following was written by Phatman Dover)

Let’s talk about this character here. He is also a fur, but it doesn’t seem like it due to his relatively smooth skin. You see, this man, he is partly Penguin. Never really fit in with either sides of the spectrum, y’know. So, naturally, he took to weed. And life is good, ‘cause he also sells. No shortage of cash, no shortage of product. Oh, looks like it’s about 5:59 AM. About a minute left until the bomb drops. Here it comes... "Goooood morning Meteopolis! Time’s 6 AM, time to get going to school, work, and all sorts of other toils. Coming up next, the Butthole Surfers with their old favourite, Pepper." There it is. “Ungh. Man. Why so early to learn shit I don’t need to know.” Ah, yes, our strapping young man is awake! How pleasant. “…Dude, where’s that narrating voice coming from? Eh, whatever.” Look, here he goes, lighting up a blunt. Ah, whatever. I got things to do…let’s have normal narration take over. Searching through his small Hiroshima of shit, he finds a bag of chips. Dorito Cool Ranch. “Awesome. Breakfast.” He munches on them until he’s satisfied. He grabs a couple of dimes and a few nickels and shoves them in his wallet, which is filled to the brim. Multiple 20’s…close to about 1 grand in there. Life’s good. “A’ight. Suppose I should get going.” He grabs his music player and his bag and heads to school, groovin’ to the tunes being pumped into his head.

“…Where is my miiiind….Where is myyyyyy mind….Out, in the water, see ya swimmin’…” One of his favourite songs. Put on when he set it to random. Life is good. He passes that fox kid that always seems to have a black eye. He never really talks to him, cause he doesn’t need his business. Refused the first time, and he decided to let him be. Like in the song. Let it be lord, let it be…

“Hell yeah, that song rocks.”

The fox kid looked over at him and glared. He looked away and stormed off. “Eh, whatever, man. Peace.” Getting into school was usually hard, especially with product. He seemed to always get the raw end of the deal, you know. They’d sometimes find that he had some kind of smell on him, but it wasn’t of weed. Lucky him, from all his money gained he was able to buy something to fool the dogs. Something like a concentrated Febreeze thing, but it provided no scent whatsoever. Got the dogs everytime. “Spread your legs. Arms out.” He snapped back: “Yeah, man, I got it. I know. Fuck.” He did as told, the dog never got him. Never, not even today. He went off to first period, science. He took a seat, but nobody else decided to come. Either that or he missed a senior skip day. Again. “Man, fuck this, I’m peacing out.” As he got up to leave, a large man blocked the door. "Sit down.” “Man, look, alright, I’m peacing out. Nobody else is here, how you gonna stop me. ”He chuckled. “How about I offer you a job?” Our stoner laughed. “Man, I don’t need no fuckin’ job. I got a perfectly good business right here. So move away, you cheeto fingers freak, before I fuck you up.” The large man laughed even harder. And then he pulled out a case. “How would you like”, he said, “To hurt those that hate you? And get paid for it?” Stoner-man smiled. “Man, forget that! All those people can go peace too. Peace is the way man, that’s the way to go.” The large man smiled an evil grin. “How about getting the ones that killed your family?”

Time stopped. Stoner contemplated this very, very hard. He was smart, but misunderstood. His family died when he was very young, and he had to fend for himself for the better part of his life, starting out stealing food and then later on becoming a user/dealer. And how many times did he want to kill those motherfuckers…How many times… “Aight bro, I’m in. But you supply the reefer and the chips. Oh, yeah, and the money and burners too.” The large man folded his arms in approval. ”Very good. By the way, my name is Robotnik, Doctor Ivo Robotnik. And you are…?” Stoner smiled and gave the peace sign. “I don’t got a name, man. I am a child of the earth. But if you need one, just call me… Karma"

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A silvery-blue fox fur sat on her bed, brushing back her long hair. She was wrapped in a towel and the steam in her room suggested that she had just finished a shower. This was a special day, the day her small school went up in flames for imposing their ideas on her delicate psyche. “Try to force me to believe in God, like hell I’ll be brainwashed by them. I bet that my teachers still think Jesus was white even though he was born in a place where everyone was black too. Dumb fucks.” She had taken off her towel as this rant continued, and had pulled a navy blue sweater over her head. A pack of matches was hidden in her bra, “I’ll blow up the school’s chem. lab this time...”

She ran to school, thinking only of the chaos she’d cause in the city of Meteopolis when the Science department went up in smoke and fire. Sneaking the matches in was easy enough; some perfume would make the room go up with its vapors. Hair spray hidden in her locker and spilled all over the floor outside the room would assist with the burning of the school. “Oh, I almost forgot, I have to find Evan to warn him.” Chances were she’d be talked out of this idea, but she was halfway to school and it didn’t matter. She never noticed the black figure following her every move.

This violent girl was named Hoshi Hikara, she had moved to the city no less then three years ago. The reason for moving was the fact that her mother had committed suicide nearly twelve years after her father had ditched out; that would make Hoshi nearly sixteen years old. This was not important, the fact that she was living alone in a big city was. She used to have foster parents, but her foster father was a drunk who hated his wife and would try and sleep with his new daughter instead, he was human. She had killed him in a fit of rage, and then made it look like her foster mother did it. While her mother served life, she lived alone.

During her chemistry class, after her lunch period, she was getting ready to light the match when an idea stopped her. If she did it now, she’d go up with the lab. This was enough to make her behave the rest of the school day, but upon returning home she found the door open, “What the hell…” Arming herself with a garden tool, she walked into the front door.

“Hello Miss Hikara, I’m here for you.” A black hedgehog stepped from the shadows of her living room, walking up to her. “My name is Shadow, and my employer is very interested in your track record, your violent streaks are just was Eggman needs in his company.”

Hoshi dropped the rake she was holding, “Wait, you’re hiring me because I’m violent? Sweet!” She grinned, “How do I sign up?”

”Come with me, everything will be made clear after that…” He walked past her and outside, not even noticing the girl following with a smile on her face…

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Evan and Rogue were sitting at a table in an abandoned warehouse planning a possible heist when Eggman walked in with Karma Evan looked and got up as a sign of respect "Dr. Robotnik I persume, it's an honor to meet you" he held out his hand, "Aaaah and the young thief Evan Ryoushi, also from what I understand abit of a scholar, a pleasure" Eggman said, accepting the handshake Evan gazed over at Karma "And the Stoner from school is here because?" Eggman looked at him. "I have reasons..."

They sat for afew hours, Karma smoking the weed Eggman plotting and Rogue and Evan continuing their brain storming session on a Fort Knox break-in. Finally Shadow and Hoshi arrive, Evan and Hoshi greeted each other surprised to see the other got Eggman's attention. Eggman clear his throat "Ladies and Gentlemen, welcome. As you know I am Dr. Ivo Robotnik" Rogue coughed out Eggman "and I have called you here for a special purpose. We are to raid the G.U.N. Technological Fortress on Omega Isle." Evan looked arkwardly at Eggman "But... that Island's impenetrable." Eggman nodded "Normaly, but I am confident this will turn out for the best today, we have a crack team. Miss Hoshi, you burned down several stores and ten Religious Book Stores" Hoshi nodded "Brainwashing centers." Eggman continued "Evan you've hack into twenty banks and made millions before age 16, now a year later you lack purpose in these attacks don't you" Evan sighed "Well...." He continued "Karma, you're distraction and extraction technquies are topnotch. and we already know what everyone else can do. So. Here's the plan. Miss Hikara and I will distract the main forces, meanwhile Evan will be on a craft piloted by Karma, he will hack the security system to all vaults, disabling them. Then Evan and Rogue will head in and grab the Chaos Emeralds from Vault 3-1983. After that a High explsovie device will be placed in the mid floor atop the vault by me. You two must be away from the center so the bomb can blow a hole through the roof. After that, Karma will extract us all. Simple" Hoshi and Evan looked at each other and said in unison "THAT's simple!?" Karma just puffed on a joint. Eggman looked back "Any other ideas?.... No? Then we start in a week, til then we train non-stop. I have prepared you rooms on the Egg Carrier. Load onto the transport and we'll all get some sleep." Everyone nodded and followed Eggman.


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Please comment on which ever part you wish. And please have CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, not flames.


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This shouldn't really be here....


Yes, THAT Hardman. This is the new and improved one.

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Well, let's see...

-It's Fan Work, that's for sure.
-It's got a nice fat warning label.
-It's approved by the good Doctor.

Yeah, I think this is the right place for it.

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This shouldn't really be here....


Why shouldn't it? It's a fan fiction, so it's fan work, and it's been approved by the Doc. I don't see any other thing to back up what you said. >>

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Originally posted by Otoko RyoushiAnd please have CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, not flames.


That's a funny thing to say when you just flamed Christians... ^^;


It's different alright. I think the story would have been better if you created all the characters yourself instead of borrowing Sega Sonic characters... Too many F-bombs too. But I guess I can't really hold that against you guys since everyone says them freely in public.

I really like that you two know how to use paragraphs (versus how many fans fictions think 3 short sentences make a paragraph). It shows that you guys have more of an attention span.

Otoko Ryoushi
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This is over, something's come up that was un-expected to say the least. I won't be finishing this. Close it, delete do whatever you want, my drive's gone...


And now I'm back, from outerspace, and I come here to find you with that sad look upon your face~

94% of all teenagers have tried drugs at one time or another. If you are one of the 6% that haven't, put this message in your signature.

AC:WW Fans, PM me for AC:WW info, don't touch my orange trees though, do whatever to the cherries.

I started the Supremem Comrade Cossack thing, I rule! =P