It's often hard to judge yourself, which is when external feedback becomes most valuable!

There's something that's been nagging me for a while: how do you see my writing? I've written a lot of words over the years, from feature explanations to silly retellings. I even wrote a Starbound short story as a writing exercise last summer.

Still, I tend to be my worst critic, and I'd like to get some outside feedback. How do you think my writing actually is? Fine as is? Needlessly long winded? Repetitive in structure? And also, is there anything specific that you believe I should improve on?

Thanks for any thoughts!