well here\'s my first comic:

part one:

where\'s muzai?

r

[Edited on 15-9-2003 by NiGhTmArE gOhAn]

<- thats all have to say...

if you drew that (which i suspect you did,) that\'s great!

Master_Tigers ratings

Male Art: 9/10 - seeing as trunks is the only male character so far he was pretty good, his hair rides up to much in some scenes
Female Characters: 8/10 - Pretty good just some of them look like sailor moon characters
Phrasing: 7/10 - some of the words overlap onto the comic so i cant tell what some things say
Layout: 7/10 - dont really know the meaning of the whole strip (like why is dana calling names for everyone? )

Great for a first attemt

tiger has a point. what IS the strip about?

What IS it about? I drew it not for people to see it I have other parts...I drew it for my g/f she wanted a comic that has more girls in it and atleast one boy. so here\'s the second one:

part two:

muzai + trunks= *blush*

r

\"Final Flash!\" hehehe, priceless!:D way better than the first!

[Edited on 15-9-2003 by Master_Tiger]

thas cool,verrry very cool

part three:
It\'s mr. knife!!!!*sorta*


r

Whaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! vegeta as a cab driver!
N-gohan how do you come up with this stuff? you should start a website!
(best one that comes to mind is freewebs)

[Edited on 16-9-2003 by Master_Tiger]

I got two I\'m using the best one out there (angelfire) And I\'m putting them on there, but my internet is messed up and I\'m glad I can even post this I can\'t get into the interordi main website or even check my pms before this thing pops up You have commited a illegal operation please restart computer......so I\'m gonna do that now.

part four:

Random acts of violence

r

the artwork is great! keep up the good work!

I still have six more:

part five:
More violence and ..cliffs?

r

dude those are awesome

part six:
SLAVES?? *Dana seems happy!! lol!

r

those rock N-Gohan, i make comics, but i\'m having a \"bad art day\" so i can\'t draw, augh. I need a scanner, blaugh! Great work there, i wish i was as good as you. You ought to be very veryproud

part seven:
Dancing Queen....and MR. KNIFE!!

r

[Edited on 17-9-2003 by NiGhTmArE gOhAn]

bring in rooster head(sanoske)

Wow, your pumping these out like crazy! Great!

I already did \'em all a year ago. I\'ll just put \'em all down:

part eight:
The DOLL! and slavery of brats..

r


part nine:
Steaks and Grapes

r


part ten: GRAND FANALE!!!

Pooooooor bus driver

r

A year ago...does this mean that you\'re even better now? And is this the conclusion to \"season one?\"

I never did the second season I was too tired to do some more so that\'s the end of it, or until I feel like drawing some more, but it\'s hard to draw.

VERY, VERY GOOD!!!!
Nice artwork too!!!

Woo.. nice Artwork.. even if I don\'t get the storyline.

Keep drawing mate, you\'ve got a ncie style!

Naah I don\'t feel like drawing anymore, but thanks for the comments.

Dude, they ROCK!!! But I was noticing a lack of the coolest character in all of DBZ.

I had to draw it for my g/f for a comic contest and she WON!!! But she told me what to draw she said that trunks is hot so I had to put him in there as long with vegeta as a bus driver, but she said only those dbz characters, but alot of girls.