Just a random unnamed character of mine. I realized after what was bothering me about the legs, so if you think they\'re off, I agree. But other than that, I don\'t think it\'s that bad. Could be better, but..

Anyways, criticism, comments, whatever. If you have anything to say, please do. =)

Like you said, legs are off.. The left leg is too skinny at the top, closest to the..err..well, crotch. And they look too short to me for some reason.. Infact alot of your characters have short looking legs to me.. Maybe I draw legs too long. The shoes could\'ve used abit more detail, like if they are leather you could\'ve made them shiny, if they\'re not I\'d assume they\'re tennishoes and need more stitching on them..

His left hand looks unnatural bent at that angle. His sword must be banana shaped if that\'s the same sword that\'s coming from the sheath on his back.

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I really like the blue of the sword sheath but..you know how I am with that kinda blue. The hair has good detail, not too shiny is good since he\'s a dark character. The face (nose especially) looks just fine..perhaps you might not want to make the cheekbones go in too far. Kenshin made me start doing that and now all my characters supposedly look old. >.< The suit is nice, pretty well done..nice shading. The shiny belt thing is cool..what is it? o.o The tie clip is a nice touch, adds classiness. Hehe.

Okay, I think that\'s enough. I tried to get everything. o.o

Yeah, the thing that struck me as odd was his sword. Though a bannana shaped sword would...allright, I\'m not touching that with a stick.

Anyway, the first time i saw him, he seemed to me like priest like guy hunting demons with a magical sword. Or something.

I don\'t know. Just first impressions. But you really should try to give him a backround. If you wan\'t, I could write a story for you. I\'m fairly proficient at writing. Well, good job!

Good i like it alot and very good shading blue sword looks awsome!!!!!.



Math

999,999,999
123,456,789,123,
+193,996,423,

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Micheal Jackson with a Katana ..

White Skin, Tipping Hat, Legs in a Stance that MJ would in, One arm bended , and Long Dark hair

Now If That\'s Not Micheal Jackson, Then I\'m not myself

Ah Hee hee Hee ..

* Moon Walks *

What it is is that I\'m running out of room on the paper but still wanted to include the feet. Poor planning on my part.



Of course they\'re leather, who wears tennis shoes with a suit? XD I had never thought of making them shinier though, thanks for the input there. I\'ll use it sometime. =)



I agree with the hand, I don\'t know what I was thinking there. But the sword is supposed to be curved, that\'s nothing new with swords having curved blades..



Thank you for all the kind words with the comments. The shiny belt thing is just there to hold his sword up on his back.



A priest-like guy hunting demons with a magic sword? What made you think that?



Thank you for the compliment and the offer, but I must decline, sorry. He actually does have a backround, I just didn\'t indulge in sharing it. I merely wanted comments on the design.



I must thank you for the compliment, but I\'m sorry to say I don\'t comprehend the math comment. Still, thank you.



Well, that\'s one way of looking at it.

Also, with this post I\'d like to show something more recent, which I also feel is better than the previous one. It\'s far from being great or anything, but I think it\'s decent. Any comments, criticism or anything else, like before, would be appreciated. =)

Well, I like the coloring..the softness is new, for you, and it makes a huge difference. You got the whole person on the paper (yay!), which is good..the legs don\'t look out of proportion this time. The perspective isn\'t bad, I like how his eyes are closed. And well, I like the sketchlines too. Good job on the outfit in general, and the hair is spiffy, too.

With the way the shirt is, I would add some kind of..folds or something to where the \'sleeve\' is. Otherwise it looks painted on his body. The hand is way too big compared to his head, the arm looks abit odd.. The shoes don\'t look like they\'re um, on the same plane? They don\'t look even. o.o The club isn\'t all that defined, you\'ll probably want to make it smaller and more detailed.

Okay, I\'m done. One last thing..Hunt\'s got pointy ears? Where have I been..

As right as Hollow is, it still is a great piece of art work. Keep it up

It\'s really good. Both of them are.

I like the second one better, however, the legs are still...distorted..but otherwise it\'s a nice pic that you drew.

congrats.

(I know that this is conceited, but...I rarely give congrats to anyone)