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Offline:eek:...There\'s really nothing I can say right now
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OfflinePlaying Polybius would leave less scars than that. 
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i like it...its sorta disturbing AND funny!:D
Bannedi personally think it SUCKS. and that you have a MAJOR problem.
[font=comic sans ms]Er.....0.o;
Well, what can I say? It\'s pretty messed up to say the least. That and drug humour died off in the 70\'s. =P
Try making more....descriptions. take an apple for example. I can say this about it:
A fruit, red as the night dusk and oblong shaped, came unto me. I bit into it; the sweet rush of flavour went coursing throughout my body and made me feel estatic.
Try and incorporate description like that into your writing. It makes it SO much more enjoyable. And remember: big words don\'t always mean sophisticated sentences.[/font]
Reality swirled in a wholly blue manner, revealing absolutely nothing of merit. Things flashed madly in and out of existence like some entirely other sort of phenomena. On a whim, Kurt Vonnegut imploded, taking a sizeable hunk of Massachusetts with him. However, seeing as Massachusetts wasn't entirely sure it existed, the chunk wasn't all that big.
Bannedphatman is right, that was pretty sad.
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