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Well my first comic, but i know i\'ll get better at it. Well dont say it sucks, but give me some GOOD feedback because its my first one..

Well....I would say its pretty good..for a first comic.:cool:

I\'ve seen worse stuff. Not too bad for a first comic. Keep working.

but its ok

Its okay. If your gonna make a second one, can you add some comidy(sp)?

A little bit of an offensive last word...
Not too shabby, but try to remember to put a warning about that this time. Not everyone on this board is over 13.

Can you take creative criticism? I sure as hell hope so...

Well, It\'s short, pointless and just silly. That\'s a good idea when you\'re just bored and want to do something.

You DO, however, need some sort of format to your comic. Lines in between \"scenes\" would work, as they add some order to the otherwise unbelieveable chaos.

And as for the speech bubbles, make them read from left to right, and the ones that come later go under ones that come earlier. For an example, please go to my site: Rated PG-13.

Take caution when reading, as there is much swearing and whatnot. See, this is why I\'m not sponsored on Bob and George...>>;

Good first effort. Keep on going!

Uh, Phantom Dover? Your dude with the sign scares me. It\'s like you know everything I\'m doing. WHY! WHY ME! Anyway, I can\'t communicate with you elsewhere, but why do you have it so creepy......

Oh, back on topic. Your sprites are great! Just give them a background and some panels to give it flavor. Check out Bob and George for an example.

www.bobandgeorge.com

You can go to the section (other) and check out Shard\'s sprite comic guide for ideas. Still, great for a first try, heck, my brother does worse..... Much worse......

Dude, I don\'t think many people on here know who Tails90 is, before he got better, his first comic sucked. RPG World it was. Bolt 3 has become infamous among the comic world because of it. I must say that of yours is worse. No background, no main point other than...

WOW!! J00 5ux5! ! 73|-| 1337!

And believe me it takes a while. My comic is good quality but is nowhere near competition of WOTN by WDN. So sit down, say this sucks wind, and start over. Remember, failure is just another way of saying start over.