Yeah I needed to copy the link...

I cna see some definite improvement over your older work. This is really really really good if you didn\'t copy it off of something, but it\'s still ok if you did.

I think you need to go over the lines more so it looks thicker, darker and more smooth.

It\'s pretty good, but I wish it was in color.

How can I put this.... I like it, but it would look alot better if your lines were smoother (sorry, but it looks like you drew it on a brick wall/ground) and if it were in color.

And you might consider Inking pictures. get like, one of those pens that acts like a gel pen, but isn\'t. Ballpoint is what I think it\'s called. It would make your pics a bit clearer and smoother.

Thats all for me.

Hmmm.... Well, you\'re using a double line style of drawing. In other words you go back and ty to redraw your prevous line in one motion. I do this myself, but you need to consentrate more about where the lines are supposed to end up, not how well you draw them. If you consentrate too much on the line itself, you get that shaggy line you got there...

You seem to have a good sence of what I like to call \"facial dimentions\", so I think you just need to clear up the lines....

those are pretty good.

Well, at least you didn\'t directly trace the Super Mario World art..but still, if you used a picture to draw from, you should say so in your first post.