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Amazing how I was able to sketch out my character for once.... now if only I could\'ve figured out how to design his scythe... -_-

I haven\'t shaded everything yet... just pretty much the face and the shiny things are a bit shaded. Any criticism or other types of comments will appreciated (not the \"you suck\" type.... >_< )

http://tinypic.com/3e7sz

[Edited on 8/27/2004 by ProtoStar]

Hao
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It looks great. Kinda fuzzy on his edges, or maybe it\'s just me.

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Very well done.. Only irks I see, are that if you\'re going for an X style reploid, I believe his legs should be shorter. Ya know, the skinny parts above the foot armor? The legs can be longer though, it\'s all a matter of style I suppose.

His eyes also look quite emotionless.. He needs something going on around there, maybe a line under the eyes like X has? An eyelid? Something..

The jewels are very nicely colored, subtle. I also like the color scheme..the dark gray and black goes well with the blue. :)

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pretty nice pic

sry if you dont want me to put up a pic of my own,

http://img56.imageshack.us/my.php?loc=img56&image=img001.jpg


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It looks great. Kinda fuzzy on his edges, or maybe it\'s just me.

Yeah, I\'m not sure why it turned out a bit fuzzy. I\'m guessing photoshop didn\'t save it at the highest quality or something...

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Very well done.. Only irks I see, are that if you\'re going for an X style reploid, I believe his legs should be shorter.

So far people have been asking me if I\'m trying to make it look like X, even though I didn\'t mean for it to. Maybe I should change the helment as well... :lol:

hmm... not sure how to do facial features that much either. I might add some more when I do more detail on the rest of the armor. ^^;

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believe me, just practice, cuz last year i was drawing stick men, and now its looking mor anime. (plus my sis is teaching me to draw better, yea, shes an art major)

btw, my characters name is plasma.

dont change his style, just some minor mishaps, and id appreciate it if youd critic mine. (and it was drwan w/pencil, and a crappy scanner)

[Edited on 27-8-2004 by planetdiver]


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awesome, but the eyes do need something.

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That\'s a really good pic. But for some reason his right leg looks a little funny. I can\'t quite put my finger on what it is, though...


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its probably too long, and there is never a final design of anything (unless the series is gone, the actuall artist dies, or you are just too lazy to finish something) :D


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