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thanks that\'s better then i would have hoped for and i\'ll start spell checking and such.

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Here I was wondering what I could do to improve my sprite comics at www.freewebs.com/katanamanzone

the comics are on the first page and part of a series I call the NeXt Generation


Spelling could be a little better, and punctuation as well.

The placement of the speech bubbles could be LOADS better. For instance, place the first what is said higher up in that panel of the comic.

Your spriting is quite good, and KatanaMan is fairly original. The storyline is also \"right up BN\'s alley\".


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The storyline is also \"right up BN\'s alley\".


So you mean to say that it\'s like every other Battle Network storyline? ;D

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Thanks for the future I\'ll keep those suggestions in mind

new comics are soon to come

and if you didn\'t notice we have a forum so if you want you can join that...


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New sheet:
http://img431.imageshack.us/my.php?image=battle7zn.png


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Nice punchline in the first one. The others were okay, but that first one was great.

And, once again... check your spelling. Xp


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Nice punchline in the first one. The others were okay, but that first one was great.

And, once again... check your spelling. Xp
He edited it in his new topic.. but stole MY idea in another!!!:madgo:


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i was kidding with your idea and i made a different punchline

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i was kidding with your idea and i made a different punchline
You don\'t have more of those, RIGHT?


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nah i just needed the chance to use that joke THE ALMIGHTY AUTHOR OF THE COMIC IS A THIEF lol j/k

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The storyline is also \"right up BN\'s alley\".


So you mean to say that it\'s like every other Battle Network storyline? ;D


Adult guy: \"KIDS! Some evil organisation is gonna take over the world and you gotta STOP THEM!\"

Kid: \"Why don\'t YOU do it? You\'re the grown-ups.\"

Adult guy: \"We can\'t! Don\'t you play any games?! The kids ALWAYS save the world!\"

Kid: \"What if we fail?\"

Adult guy: \"You won\'t! If you die, you\'ll just go back to your last Save File and try again!\"

Kid: \"WTF?\"

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... yeah, something like that. XP


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i use mspaint for my comics:
is there a quick way to recolor?

i heard you can doit some how with the eraser

ive been doing it pixel by pixel


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I used Ms paint for mine too

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so ribitta how do i recolor?

i am sick and tired of pixel by pixel and i am positive there is another way to do it

Try Microsoft Picture It! 9... but mine.... dissapeared!:cry::cry::cry::cry:


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that eraser thing isn\'t worth it you have to erase the colors by each pixel first anyway

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Recoloring is really easy to do, and you\'re a fool if you do it pixel-by-pixel...

Go read Bob and George\'s tutorials.

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Eh? Link not working.

[Edited on 3/4/06 by Mr.Mettaur]

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~HOW TO RECOLOR WITH THE ERASER TOOL.~

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... Man, I look HORRIBLE in green...


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That was hilarious. Nice job.


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:rofl: nice one Flareman

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god that was good

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Here\'s an example of decent shading, dark anyways.


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Notice the darkest color, and second? How they tend to blend? Yeah. That\'s how most sprites should be based on colors.

Second, he\'s an example of a pose.

Note, my helmet is half-scratched.

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See? It tends to go with the flow.

and here\'s just a random sprite I havn\'t found a name for.

She\'s in the works of a full-makeover

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Credit to lizzy for the sprite base.

Credit to 2 for helping me with the shading.

NOTE: Do me a favor, my sprite isn\'t PD (Public Domain). Don\'t go using it without my permission, atleast. Ask me first, even if it is for reference.

[Edited on 3/6/06 by Sage]


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Had assistence too, eh?


.... FLAREMAN!!!!!! HELP!!!:

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Eh? No. Female sprite was PD. 2, only did a lil shading, majority is mine.

Basically, 2 did a \'touch-up\' meaning, fixed what I messed up. Other then that, yeah. Reast is my idea. Totally custom, all of it.

[Edited on 3/7/06 by Sage]


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Ah, you do good shading Sage.. I don\'t see that much in sprites anymore.

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Wow shading... preeeety...


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I got a comic here to bad it got shrunken.:mad:


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by the looks of it it looked pretty good but it\'s too small to see all of it or read anything

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Two parts from my comic cool ? I am mad that I can\'t post the whole thing, but that is the last fight of the tournament.

[Edited on 10-3-2006 by saiyanprince5]


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[quote]Originally posted by saiyanprince5
Two parts from my comic cool ? I am mad that I can\'t post the whole thing, but that is the last fight of the tournament.

[Edited on 10-3-2006 by saiyanprince5] [/quote]

Ngh... gah... Grrr... argh... Shnkt...

*twitch/spasm*

TIME TO FLA... I mean... show you your problems.

~~PROBLEM NUMERO ONE.~~
... Is that Goku? Fighting BASS.EXE? Not only are these characters from different universes (Goku in the real world, and Bass.EXE in the internet.), but also different shows alltogether... It\'d actually make MORE sense to have Goku fighting regular ol\' Bass from the Classic games. And even then, it\'s a horrible, horrible character matchup.

Try and keep your comics within a single series, and definitely... DEFINITELY don\'t mix bittages.

[Edited on 10-3-2006 by FlareMan]


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