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Crystaldragon:Hello fellow people of the message board, my name is Crystaldragon. I am here to tell you the fanfic because Beastman had a little to much sugar......and when she gets a hold of the sugar, bad things happen...*hears crashing in the living room* Err...I better hurry with this. Oh yah, this story contans bloody gore an other stuff little children might not like. Now where did-NO BEASTMAN GET AWAY FROM THE KNIFES! *slice!* Oh god.....




Chapter 1

Axl walked down the lonely streets of the city. Normaly it would be filled with people and the roads would be full of cars. But everything was so quiet...to quiet. Zero, X, and Axl were sent to see why, and didn\'t find much clues. They tried knocking on doors, checking alleys, and still nothing.
\'This is getting boring\' Axl said to himself. \'Theres nothing wrong here\' He strode over to another emty alley, and saw nothing that seemed very interesting. He passed the corner and suddenly flew backward and hit the side walk hard. \"Oww!\" he yelled. He stode up and saw Zero getting up as well. \"Axl! Sorry bud. wasn\'t watching were I was going.\" he said. \"I see\" Axl said. His voice heavy with sarcasim. Zero looked around and said, \"Seen anything so far?\"
\"Nothing. Just a deserted town.\" he said. \"Have you seen X? I\'ve been looking all over for him.\" Zero said. Axl took a quick look over his shoulder. \"Not that I know of\" Just then a blue blure of light flashed by them, and came back to veiw. It was X, looking very tired. He was panting. \"Zero! Axl!\" He said through gasps. \"I found something! Down the back alley near the inn!\" They all followed him, taking twisted turns and slithering through tight corners. When they were there, they all gasped. There was a large trial of blood leading to a dark alley beside the inn. \"What the hell?\" Zero said quietly. He went aheed furthur untill he heard a sound, someone was groaning. He dared not to look, but he did, and what he saw next would of made him faint. There was a man, his right arm was competly gone, and there was a large gash in his side. He turned to see the attacker-he froze. Axl and X came over, and turned white as a sheep. What they had thought to be a maverick, was somethingh far more horrific...

Sorry if it seems a bit short. After that sugar rush, I feel a kinda strange.

Like it? Hate it Reveiw! I\'ll get the next chapter up soon!

[Edited on 4-11-2004 by BeastmanEXE]


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Sounds pretty nice, but it may help to explain where they were first (specificaly wht there\'s a sidework). There are other minor problems (a few run on sentences, spelling errors, etc.), but it\'s generally ok so far. I\'ll watch to see developments...

You\'re lucky. ZI don\'t usually check fanfic topics, but I\'m SOOOOOO bored right now. I\'ll prowl the board like a tiger...:devil:


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Nuh......my fingers are num. x_x;;; how will I ever get through this? Ah well.... Oh yes, lots of bloody stuff in this chapter. And I know i\'m no good at spelling or grammer, but as long as you can read it you shouldn\'t worry. I\'ll try to make this chapter longer this time.




Chapter 2:


Axl stared at the horrific sight befor Him. The bloody carcass was slowly dying away, and the monster...he couldn\'t describe it. \"What is it?\" He stared in awe. \"quiet Axl! it might here you!\" X snaped. To late. The beast spun around and locked eyes with the intruders. Its dim yellow eyes were transfixed on the three hunters.

It gave a low growl and walked over to them. Large silver spikes covered its back, sharp white fangs gleamed in the light. \"Oh no...\" X said. He wanted to run. He just wanted to get away from here. This strange creature couldn\'t be a maverick, It looked nothing like one. There was something differnt about it.

\"Guys lets get out of here!\" Axl wispered. Zero glared at him. \"A hunter never runs from a battle!\" He yelled back. Axl looked nervously in front of him. The creature was advancing upon them, And it didn\'t look like it was in the moood to talk. \"well I gusse, but i\'m a little to freaked right now guys. This one definitely isn\'t a maverick.\" He wispered. \"No kidding. I think we should report back to base and get some more information first.\" X said.

The beast gave a shrill shreik and lunged at them. X and Axl jumped out of the way while zero fell to the ground trying to stop the monsters massave jaws from coming down on him. X\'s eyes grew wide with fear. \"Zero!\" He yelled. Zero was having a difficult time. He tried to reach for his saber but didn\'t have much luck. \"Axl!\" X yelled. \"go back to headquarters and get some help!\"

Axl ran like the wind. He saw the gateway about one block ahead. He dashed to the entrance and flew backwards on the ground. \"what the heck?!\" he said. There was a large force sheild surronding the entire city. He pounded his fists againts the wall and let out a scream. This wasn\'t here befor. How would they get out? They were trapped here forever now. Soon they would all die from that horrible monster. And Zero would be first...

Meanwhile in the center of the city the showdown continued. X charged his buster and shot at the monster. The beast quickely evade and dashed toward X at great speed. It struck X hard on his side with its tail and he smashed into a building leaving a large dent as fell down on the ground. Zero got up, saber in hand and ran towards the creature. It turned its attention back at the red hunter speeding towards it.

It lunged forward at him. They both hit each other dead on, Zero smashed into the building behind him. He had underestimated this creatures strengh. His hand had been pinned againts the wall. His hand soon gave way to the strain of the holding and his saber fell. The beast brought its fangs down hard on zeros neck. He cried in pain as it went in deeper. The creature smiled with satifaction and began to suck the blood from his neck. Zero began to feel drowsy. He closed his eyes after awhile and limped in the beasts claws. The creature losened its grip and cought zero in its arms.

X had finnaly awoken from the impact of the crash and stared in shock at what lied befor him. Zero was down, Axl hadn\'t returnd, and now he was next in line for the kill.



phweo! All done. I\'ll get the next one tommorow. PLEASE REVEIW! I really ahte it when people just read in leave. Comments and crit welcome.


Lewa: OMG! Look at that cute little green bug!
Tahu: Uhh Lewa, thats a kraata.
Lewa: I'm gonna call him Mr.Squishy!
Kraata: Squeek!

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BAD BEASTMAN! YOU DIDN\'T POST YESTERDAY! *looks around* Hi.........I.............um....*AHEM* Yes, i\'ll get this chapter a little more discriptive here. *yawn* ok here we go on with da fic!


Chapter 3:



The forest was quiet. The wind blew along through the night sky bringing leaves twirling through the air. It was like this befor. Everything quite. She liked it that way. Nothing wrong, everything absolutely quiet. The trees were still, The air was cool. The sky darkend every few minutes. Night was aproching. The moon aperead later on as the stars shone beside it. It was truly a beautiful night. She wished for it like this all the time. Nothing wrong. She walked over to a tall wide evergreen and brought her claws down on it as she climbed upwards. She went to the highest branch, and layed down on top of it. She let the sounds of autume lull her to sleep. There soothing sound brought her to rest.

She awoke abrubtly when a crackling noice came from the bushes below. A bulky, wolf like creture emerged. \"Maverick\" She hissed. The one thing that you wouldn\'t want to run into. It looked around, sniffing the air. He bent down on the rough dirt floor beaneth him and stared at the clawed footprint in the ground. Her footprint to be exact. She moved in for a closer look, knocking a small limp branch off the tree as it fell mere inches away from the wolf. He raised his brow susspicusely and eyed the tree were she sat. \"Whos there?\" His gruff old voice shattered the nights silence. After a moment he turned away. \"Must of been a squirrel or something.\" He said.

He continued on his way through the underbrush. \"Wonder were hes going.\" She wispered. She climbed back down the tree and quietly made her way to the lone maverick. He was walking down to a path that lead into a underground building. After he dissapered She went in after him. She made her way to a corner and peeked through the side. There were more mavericks. A huge bull-like one. Two large horns on his head and a ring in his nose. He also had one mean looking cannon on his arm. His blood-red armor gleamed in the light of the small lamps in the corner of the room.

The other one, A short bug maverick with huge claws and bright green armor buzzed continuesly. His anteni sweveled here and there. Two sets of wings covered his back. The last one resembled a iguana. His green scaley skin and blue armor set of a bright shine. \"Here anything so far?\" The lizard said. The wolf shock his head. \"Nothing. Haven\'t heard a word from the base. I was hoping we would after waiting do long.\" He said quietly. \"Dya see anythin\' outside?\" The big bull asked. \"Rustles in the trees. Other than that nothing.\" His gruffy voice made it hard to hear.

She decided she had heard enough. She tip-toed up the stairs, hopefully no one would here her. She stopped to see if they were still there. She looked behind herself and saw the lizard coming forward. She dashed for the entrance as quietly as a dear. She jumped into the bushes just in time befor he emerged. \"Hey Scales! were ya goin\'?\" That was the bull. \"Just getting some air.\" He called back. While they were talking She made her way out of the bushes and to the big evergreen. Not a smart move. The Lizard cought sight of her, and he ran after her. Next thing she knew she was unconcise on the ground.



WEEE! Better chapter! Your probbably wondering who \"she\" was. I can\'t tell you till next chapter! PLEASE REVIEW! Or at least say something. I worked hard on this.


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Tahu: Uhh Lewa, thats a kraata.
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Bwahahaha......I feel crazy. Not my normal self-hell i\'m never normal XD Okay haven\'t posted for awile. Though I know nobody will bother reveiwing or reading, I write it anyways. Gives me practice :P And its late-to late.....bah who cares. On with the fic.



Chapter 4




\"Run run run run as fast as you can, you can\'t escape me! I\'m da boogie man!\"

\"Ahh! Hes gonna eat us!\"

The three children chased each other round and round. A non-stop game of tag was going on.

Among the children, there was one girl. She had long brown hair tied up in a pony-tail. She wore a White tanktop and black jeans, and had bright blue eyes and wore a necklace with a silver dragon on it.

The other two boys, one with short black-brown hair and glasses with a red sweat-shirt and blue jeans. He was taller than the girl and the other boy and had dark brown eyes.

The other one had short dirty blond hair and wore blue jeans and a large black coat with a white sweat-sheart under it. He was a bit short with green emarald eyes.

\"Here comes kitty!\" The short boy said. He lept into the air and landed ontop of the girl.

\"Your it!\" He shouted.

\"allright already! Now get off!\" She yelled back.

The small boy grinned. \"They don\'t call me kitty for nothing.\" He said proudly.

Aaron, or kitty as the others called him was a very fast runner and was allso very stelthy. Thats how he earned his nickname, but most of all because he could purr like a real cat.

-NOT FINISHED-I\'M TYPING THIS IN CAPS CAUSE I GOTTA GO TO BED. COME BACK TOMMOROW AND IT WILL BE DONE.-

The tall boy walked up to them. \"Hey guys, wanna go back now? Its getting late.\" He said after pushing his glasses back up to his eyes.


Lewa: OMG! Look at that cute little green bug!
Tahu: Uhh Lewa, thats a kraata.
Lewa: I'm gonna call him Mr.Squishy!
Kraata: Squeek!

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