Hi all. I decided to make a new topic for this drawing. I tried to imatate manga, but I\'m really not good at it. Still, I put alot of work into the picture, so I hope somebody can enjoy it.



Any feedback would be appreciated.

At the bottom right, the man with the white hair, which way is he facing? Because from here is looks as if he is looking to the left and his feet are to the right. XP

But overall, good work. Alot better than I can accumulate, I can tell you that much. And I am really surprised to put so much effort into the grass blades. I would have put \" marks everywhere and been done with it. =3

Thanks for the feedback Enix, I appreciate it.

The guy is looking to the right in the bottom frame. I can understand the confusion there, but in my defence I have to say it\'s hard to make distinguishing characteristics with such small details.

And yeah, I put alot of work into the grass. I\'m craaaaaaazy like that. I\'m glad you noticed.

Niiiiice! I love the grass.

Are these your own characters, or is it an actual scene from a Manga?

I\'m glad you like the grass. I spent many hours working on it.

And those are indeed my own characters. I don\'t like to do fanart of existing manga characters simply because I think they will look ugly in my style and I\'m frankly not good at imitating others artwork.

Very nice I didn\'t look at the date when I started this comment so I\'m going to pretend that it was yestarday. So did you ink this by hand or did you use a program like paintshop pro or photoshop? Because it\'s really well done!

I love the halftone on the rock/characters/hair. The panel work is also very nice. In the first panel, the rock hard ab and the \"my hands behind my back, ohh! Mystery!\" thing is a little awkward.
The perspectives are great, and the water is...nothing less than incredeble. ;D keep up the work, Necro.

Well now, this is really suprising. I wasn\'t expecting any more comments here.

Thank you. With the exception of the tones, this was done completely by hand. I added the tones on the computer, but the inking was 100% by hand.



Thank you very much. You are indeed right, that is an ocean. I\'m glad someone thinks it looks well done, because it didn\'t come out as well as I had hoped it would..



Thank you. I agree that the abs and hand behind the back look awkward in the second panel. It just wouldn\'t agree with me. But thank you for the compliments on the perspective and water.

Again, thanks to everyone who has replied in this topic. I really appreciate the feedback.