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QuoteCrossOver Comics is back!
Sonic cast sprites were ripped by Daniel Siney.
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[Edited on 13-12-2005 by Juno]
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CrossOver Comics is back!
Sonic cast sprites were ripped by Daniel Siney.
Comic intro
[Edited on 13-12-2005 by Juno]
InactiveI don\'t get it? What the devil is happenin?
Don\'t rush the storyline, Juno. Make us get to know the Main Characters first, then take them into a giant maze filled with contrived plotholes.
And I recommand you to use Paint\'s text editor.
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NO!!! It\'s Zoids Sagas for the Gameboy Advance all over again!:sick: j/k
But, er, I think these might be some good pointers for your comic.
-To avoid making your comics into the \"spawn of Zoids Sagas,\" please don\'t use random dimension hopping. I mean, like, every two seconds.
-Try not to mix bittages.
-Try to find a way to type out your words to make them look uniform.
-Are those YOUR custom sprites...?<_<
-Never ever never use the word \"fellas\" in formal conversation. Zoids Saga no-no #1. You haven\'t done it yet, but I thought I\'d warn you.
[Edited on 7-12-2005 by AimMan v2.5]
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Wow ummm...wow. At least you place the backgrounds and all well, but honestly..there\'s no storyline. \"What the devil\" is not a storyline.
And last I checked, Black and Red Mages in FF1 have no personality.
BannedMmm.. give the boy some credit.. after all... most of you weren\'t brave enough to bring your sprite comics.
Bye-bye, Inti.... IF Doc bans me like I told him to.
Rioni... thanks for the Final-Zero music..
It\'s a great comic but kinda stretch the story a little.
It doesn\'t really look like there is any real coherent plotline, sorry. Perhaps there is in your head, but it\'s simply not translating well into your comic. You need to slow down the pacing to allow for more character development, because honestly, you need to make people care about the characters so that they\'ll continue reading. So far just a bunch of weird shit has occurred, and I can\'t tell what from reading the comics alone. Again, you need to slow down the pace and have a frame or two explain actually what you\'re trying to convey through imagery. Because honestly, it\'s confusing.
I hope it doesn\'t seem like I\'m blasting you. I\'m just trying to be helpful. 
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A littlw tip: When a characters speak, make the hight of the speech bubble correspond to the order in which they are speaking.
For example, Black Mage laughed first so the bubble should have been first and higher than MegaMan\'s. Then MegaMan spoke so his needed to be slightly lower and Black Mage\'s final bubble the lowest.
Check an online comic for what I mean.
