FF 1 comic

This is my first sprite comic staring the Black mage and Fighter from the original Final Fantasy games, considering I did it in one hour, and have no experience whatsoever, I thought it came out pretty good, comments would be liked.

[Edited on 7-6-2005 by Megaman Masta]

This sort of turned out poorly.

-Try to have the sprites\' feet touch the ground.
-The joke is sort of weak but you can work on that later.
-The pixel editing doesn\'t look so great. The panel 5 black mage\'s head looks too fat.
-You should also use one pixel size per frame. The fighter of panel 6 has eyes that don\'t match the rest of his body. Same goes for the panel 3 black mage.
-Use consistent colouring. The panel 6 fighter has blue on his armour where it should be white and the panel 5 black mage is standing on a white square for no reason.
-You probably don\'t need to put the copyright thing on the last panel. Not only because these sprites are already copyrighted by Square but also because no one is going to steal your comic.

I\'m not sure what program you used to make these so I can\'t tell you what techniques to use specifically. Anyways, there\'s a lot of problems but at least you spelled everything correctly. But your grammar still needs work.

[Edited on 7-6-2005 by Pocket]

Oh, Um, I\'ll make sure to work that stuff out, and now that I realize it, I hate myself for using that joke...I used paint as well. *Scurries off to write some good ideas.*

P.S. The quality is shown really poorly, so I think if anyone wants to view this it would be wise to save picture as...

[Edited on 7-6-2005 by Megaman Masta]

One question: have you read 8 Bit theater? If not, you need your head bashing in. It is THE FF 8 bit comic.

As for your comic:

The noted problems by Pocket of course. Nearly everybody starts out with carbon copied jokes, so don\'t be discouraged. I was and still am the same.