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Hello. This is a doodle done by me today. I still have a cast on my drawing hand which made it really difficult to draw but at least I can tell who it is. Hopefully you can too! :lol:

The doodle itself wasn\'t finished, which should be obvious, but I felt like coloring it anyways.

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Any comments?


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I see your using my tecnique :) well... not MY tecnique, but the one i have started using. I always love sketchy looks, lets you see how the idea came to life.

About the picture, well.... Her head is a bit narrow and her hand making the \"V\" mark is kind of thin and the arm is a bit too big. Her bow is kind of disproporitonate compared with the chest. you kind of got the angle wrong. Sorry for the lousy comments but taking critisizm makes you a better artist :)

Still love the coloring though :D


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Thank you for the comments, I appreciate it. You have my gratitude. =)

I can tell you don\'t know me very well by what you said, but I\'d like to let you I have no problem with critiicism and I\'m actually quite appreciative of criticism. It helps like you say. I\'m not fond of praise really because all that does is build an ego in a subject where it\'s not needed. I believe egos in art hurts artists because it stunts their growth.

I\'m glad you enjoyed the sketchy aspect of the drawing. That\'s all I can really do right now as drawing with a broken wrist really isn\'t very easy. I\'m happy with a picture that has many mistakes right now because just being able to actually get something on paper again that\'s somewhat decent is quite a good feeling. It\'s also nice to know I can color decent right now too. :lol:

Thanks for responding. It\'s always nice to get feedback from fellow artists.


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No problem, good to see that some still is able to take critic :)

I know what you mean about the cast, I had my left arm broken for about half a year. I\'m right handed but I coudn\'t hold the paper, so the pictures truned out pretty bad. But considering you are wering a cast on your drawing arm, you managed to get a pretty clean line, most people tend to zig zag very much. hmmm.... but thats praise, so that woud kind of be backfireing :lol:


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Sailor Moon, eh? I like that picture. You are way better than me, but I\'ll get there! Points nkot mentioned by Snakeman, where the glove ends at the elbow is way too broad. (I hate saying fat, cuz people find that offending)


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i like that drawing, cant really draw myself so i cant say much.


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that drawing is good. Looks like one of my drawings.


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She\'s adorable. =)

Her head\'s abit big in the back..but her ponytail thing kinda covers that up anyway. The part in her bangs doesn\'t line up with the middle of her face. Her outfit is done well..the bow doesn\'t look on center with her boobies though. Her mouth looks like it should be up towards her nose a tad more.

The skirt is pretty.. =) Pretty much all you had trouble with, is some centering..it seems. The basic form is down pretty well. =)

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Originally posted by HollowTorment
She\'s adorable. =)

Her head\'s abit big in the back..but her ponytail thing kinda covers that up anyway. The part in her bangs doesn\'t line up with the middle of her face. Her outfit is done well..the bow doesn\'t look on center with her boobies though. Her mouth looks like it should be up towards her nose a tad more.

The skirt is pretty.. =) Pretty much all you had trouble with, is some centering..it seems. The basic form is down pretty well. =)

Well those are if you want to be perfect, remember its called doodle


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Necro\'s a perfectionist. I\'m sure he doesn\'t mind me picking his picture apart, because he does it plenty himself.

I\'m not going to ease up on my criticism just because it\'s a doodle.

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looks good necro

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Just to point out, that doodle is better than all of my best work!